White Rock Bay
by Chad Merrell
Antelope Island, Great Salt Lake
Most of the development of this was done in-camera as I used the JPEG.
I did some curves adjustments of the dark tones on the island mountain, desaturated a spot on the shore at the bottom and a little sharpening.
C&C please
Canon 60D
EFS 15-85 @ 85 mm
ISO 100
f11
1/160 second
Thanks for any suggestions.
Comments
5 commentsThe light is good here, 'cept maybe the clouds look a bit magenta/grayish. Could see trying to match them closer to the snow on the mountain. I'm also wondering about going more pano with this and cropping the foreground. JPEG jaggies are pretty bad in the foreground and cropping also simplifies the scene somewhat.
The clouds result in a little early morning color but should be easy to adjust. They are however pretty flat and featureless.
I like Tony's pano suggestion as I agree the foreground shore isn't really adding much to the overall scene. To be honest, the composition is a little awkward in that the foreground mountain kinda blocks the grander looking range in the bg. You might see if you can reduce the appearance of haze in the bg by playing with the contrast back there perhaps? It's a nice enough scene, but I don't think one of your better images.
So, in the end, if it were mine - I think cropping the bottom for a pano look. Then I'd actually reduce the contrast of the foreground mountain (open it up a little) while increasing the contrast selective in far, bg range. Just some thoughts.
Lon