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Serene Storm II
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Serene Storm II

by Leo Collazo

Gallery: LandscapePosted April 25, 201270 views2 comments
I got some good constructive feedback the other day telling me that the first version I posted of this image "Serene Storm" looked a bit flat. Thanks Mark and Nick for the feedback! I agreed with that, so I decided to see if I could bring a bit more depth and visual impact to this image. I played around with curves and contrast, as Stan suggested, and was able to bring out more detail on the rocky landscape in the background. I also brought out more of the color in that same background, and in the iceberg as well. I think I was able to get just a tad more detail on the top of the middle distant peak, but not a lot. By giving the image more contrast, I lost just a bit of detail from the dark, narrow strip of land directly behind the iceberg, but I like how it makes the blue of the iceberg stand out even more. In addition, I also increased the amount of sharpness in the entire image, using Unsharp Mask, by 20%, and I'm not sure if that's too much, but I do like how it looks. I darkened the clouds a bit as well, which to me makes the sky a bit more dramatic.

As always, I'd appreciate your comments and suggestions. Thanks, and I look forward to your feedback!

Canon EOS 5D Mark II, EF24-70mm f/2.8L lens, f/11, 1/125, 100 ISO

Comments

2 comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on April 25, 2012 at 3:00 PM
This works really well for me. I like the quite graphic feel of this composition. There is a good repetition of shapes and the colors work well. I don't know if t improves the composition, but I think cropping from the right might help. I think the open space between ice and image border is a bit of an eye catcher - where it should not be.
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Nathan Apodaca on April 25, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Nice image. The contrast looks good and natural to my eye, and the blue color of the ice really pops out against the other more subtle colors around it. If anything, I might try a slightly tighter crop, taking Dietrich's comment into mind, and at the same time limiting the sky from taking up too much room. This is certainly just my two cents---not even sure if I agree with myself!

Not sure where this was taken, but it looks like an amazing place to visit. TFS!
Registered on November 16, 2011, 67 Posts, 1127 Comments