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Hidden gem

by Peter Coskun

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 26, 2012335 views19 comments
While hiking in Mount Rainier to check out bench lake and snow lake we were advised by an older gentleman of a waterfall past the end of the trail. He said it wasn't big or anything, but just a nice view. He sold himself short, because I found this to be a beautiful waterfall. There is only a portion of the waterfall that is visible here, but I found these wildflowers that were just starting to bloom that added a nice contrast of color. Not sure what species they are (bleeding hearts?). Once past the end of the trail, we saw only three other people. On our way back we stopped for a brief snowball fight as there was a large patch of soft powder. A gift for a summer day. Although this was midday light, there was a generous cloud that covered the sun for a few minutes that helped soften the light on the falls and foreground. Comments and critiques appreciated. (also this is suffering from web compression so forgive me).

Canon 7d
Canon 17-40mm
ISO 100
1/2 sec
f22 (Very close to the foreground flowers)
Tripod
CPL

Comments

19 comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on August 26, 2012 at 5:12 PM
What a pretty scene Peter, and presented beautifully.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on August 26, 2012 at 5:43 PM
The colors and soft feeling of this image works very well. The water blur is very good. The only nit I have is it does feel like it needs just a bit of rotation. Maybe it is just an allusion because of the angle.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Smith on August 26, 2012 at 6:01 PM
I like the glow of the blossoms...and their looping to left ...similar trajectory of the falls. Throughout a warm golden glow radiates, save the water which anchors the scene. That branch blocking the upper view of falls is an 'as is' feature and incurable...but I'm wishing it would go away. Nicely done!
Registered on September 5, 2008, 449 Posts, 2444 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on August 26, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Very nice. wonderful colors and nice soft water. Lovely image
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on August 26, 2012 at 8:44 PM
Well composed Peter. Wonderful view of the wild flowers in the foreground.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on August 26, 2012 at 9:06 PM
A lovely little paradise. The flowers combined with the falls are just beautiful. The glowy fuzziness and saturation is a little too intense for me, though.
Registered on December 19, 2008, 306 Posts, 4840 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on August 26, 2012 at 9:17 PM
Thanks everyone!

Ken- I'm not sure if this is quite level as it I can't remember so, but should be somewhere close at least. I wish the branches weren't blocking the top either, but these were the only wildflowers by the falls so the comps were very limited.

Floris- I agree about the fuzziness, but the image here is quite compressed on this site so that adds to the fuzziness. As for the saturation, it looks a bit more saturated here than on my computer, but I can likely tone that down a bit.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Tonia Graves on August 26, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Beautiful scene and artfully presented! This has somewhat of a dreamy feel to it. Nice work Peter!
Registered on October 29, 2011, 92 Posts, 1035 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on August 27, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Fabulous composition. I'm curious about the softness of the background and its cause. Intentional or due to inadequate DOF?
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on August 27, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Tonia and Kah kit yoong.

The background softness is likely due to inadequate DOF, even at f22 I was still smothering the flowers as they are very small. I considered doing a DOF blend but decided not to in the end. I selectively sharpened the falls to make it more crisp, but the web compression here isn't doing any favors.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on August 27, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Peter,

This is just lovely. You don't mention anything about processing so I'll assume the light and "glow" is natural? I'm really enjoying the glow, but the eye tells me hints or Orton or fogging of the lens or something? Don't get me wrong, I love the image presented, just a natural curiosity of how this was done.

And those flowers could be a subject all by themselves. Did you get any just filling the frame with those beauties?

Well done all the way around.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on August 27, 2012 at 3:05 PM
This is such a beautiful scene. I agree about the fuzziness. Well composed!
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 27, 2012 at 3:54 PM
The fuzziness and strong colors create a bit of dream-like quality to this. I think this is a very fine composition that might easily be overlooked by others. Glad you spotted it.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on August 27, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Thanks!

Lon, I usually don't go over my post processing because a lot of times it is just too much to type, but the glow is a combination of an orton like layer and the mist from the falls. Don't let the distance fool you, my lens was still getting water on it at this position. The orton layer probably added too much glow but even more so from web compression here. I'll have to rework this one to see if I can get it to print.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on August 27, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Here is a reprocessed image with less glow. brightened it up a bit as well.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on August 27, 2012 at 8:23 PM
Peter,

thanks for the response - and the repost is excellent IMHO. I think it's "richer." I like both very much.

Hope you don't think I was trying the squeeze the processing info out of you. Really, I just was asking for my own knowledge and ability in learning to recognize different techniques. In the end, it's the image and what we're trying to portray that matters. Thanks!

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on August 27, 2012 at 10:37 PM
No not at all Lon, I don't try to hide my processing, I just feel it's secondary to actually being there although it is an integral part of the final image. Most of my images have a lot of layers and masks but if I cloned something out I'll usually mention that.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Phil Pogledich on August 28, 2012 at 3:12 PM
The second one works very well for me, Peter. The first struck me as having too much of the Orton effect, which over time I've generally come to dislike (but tastes certainly differ). As Lon said, you did well to find a composition here that others would likely have missed.
Registered on August 24, 2009, 123 Posts, 3099 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on August 28, 2012 at 7:07 PM
I like the comp but the orton effect is a little too strong for me.

Edit: just saw the repost, much better!
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments