Indecision
by Youssef Ismail
I have been going back to this particular photo for the last two years, unsure of its potential. I like it and still I feel something is just not right. So I thought maybe it needed a different crop. So I did that and now it just added to my indecision as to which one I like and if I like the photo at all, I mean I do like it, aargh!
I would all your honest opinions on this photo and which of the three crops you think works best.
4x5, 300mm, f22, 8 sec on Fuji Provia 100F
First image, full frame, second a 3:1 Crop and the third a 2:1 crop.
Once I decide on this and its crop I will post again with all dust bunnies cloned out and as a larger version for the immense detail.
Comments
22 commentsIMO first image, as it portrays the vastness of the place....TFS
John
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
First of all, this is a beautiful coastal seascape from Big Sur - Is this Garrapata also? Looks like.
Here's my .02. I prefer the original simply because of the grand view, showcasing the coast beautifully with the warm glow, color and even the texture, mood of the ocean. I also really, really like the 3:1 crop with a suggestion. This is beautiful and agree with others would make for a gorgeous print. My suggestion is that the top is too cramped. If you had the top equal in spacing to the 2:1 crop, this would be my choice. The 3:1 is my last and least favorite for 2 reasons. 1. The rock in the LL is pretty dominant and I think upsets the overall balance and 2. the corner of sky isn't working - it's more like an oversight or something. I can't see this version making it to a fine art print. Now, if you cloned in some headlands or did something to eliminate any sky in that corner, I would have a different opinion.
You most certainly have a beautiful keeper in that mix somewhere.
Lon
First off---INCREDIBLE! I love the scene, and it appears to be edited very well, IMO. Here's my thoughts on each crop...
#1---I like the context here, which just about places the viewer into the scene. I do feel like I don't know where to settle my eyes, though.
#2---I may be leaning towards this simplified version. There's a lot of details, but all of it is one idea---richly colored rocks poking out above the moving water.
#3---This crop catches my eyes, but the small bit of sky is a bit distracting.
All that to say, I prefer the second, but still really like the first. I doubt this was much help, but thought I'd talk out loud here.
Again, I really am enjoying this image! Great capture, and I hope you find the right crop...