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Alberta Sunrise

by Lindy Martin

Gallery: LandscapePosted September 22, 2012248 views8 comments
Is this too dark - are there options for making it better?? C&C appreciated.

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8 comments
Comment posted by Dean Sauskojus on September 22, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Lindy it does look a little dark. From what I can see the composition looks good and you have a nice reflection in the water of the peak. Brighten up the exposure and this would look much better. Nice image.
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Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on September 22, 2012 at 2:25 PM
I agree with what Dean said. this is a lovely scene. In particular, I like the nice regular ripples on the waters surface.
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Comment posted by Scott Smorra on September 22, 2012 at 5:57 PM
"Is this too dark?" - yes, the top half of the image is too dark. What kind of camera/lens/filters did you use? What were the exposure settings? How did you process the image? With more information, I can give you some suggestions about how to brighten the image.
Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments
Comment posted by Lindy Martin on September 22, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Settings are: D700, ISO 100 ss= 1/8, -2 EV, f22 with a Singh ray Rowell filter over the mountain. Camera set to vividl Lightroom 4 with increased blacks, highlight at 76, lightened up the shadows to 98. Should I just lighten where the filter was? Thanks for your help.
Registered on March 10, 2009, 60 Posts, 169 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Smorra on September 22, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Thanks for the additional info Lindy. Yes, I would just lighten the area where the filter was. Use the graduated filter in LR4 and increase the exposure. You can also use the shadows and blacks sliders to open up the shadows a bit. Next time in the field I wouldn't use the GND filter for this type of shot. Usually during the mid day time you don't need GNDs unless the sky is considerably brighter than the land. In general, the GNDs work best for sunrise/sunset.
Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Miller on September 22, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Slightly dark and could possibly use a slight crop from the bottom? Otherwise very nice. :smile:
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Comment posted by Gary Jacobson on September 23, 2012 at 12:24 AM
In addition to lightening the image on the top portion of the image, I would also crop a bit off the left to eliminate the distracting rock in the lower left. A beautiful scene! Was this captured near the Jasper Park Lodge? It looks like Pyramid Mountain in the background.
Registered on May 20, 2012, 17 Posts, 41 Comments
Comment posted by Lindy Martin on September 23, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Shot from the east side of the island in pyramid lake. Good call- it is pyramid mtn
Registered on March 10, 2009, 60 Posts, 169 Comments