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March of the Aspen
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March of the Aspen

by Brian Schrayer

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 18, 2012379 views7 comments
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Here's an image from my recent fall color trip to Colorado. My work schedule has been busy since I returned so I haven't participated much - hopefully I'll have a little more time for a while.

All honest comments and critiques are welcome.

I am particularly interested in your thoughts on the composition. I personally like it, but I'm interested in other's thoughts.

D700
112mm
f13; 1/160 sec.
ISO 200
Polarizer

Diffused light from overcast skies from passing storm.

Processing:
1. RAW Conversion
2. Curves adjustment layer with slight s-curve for global contrast
3. Slight vignette to further emphasize the aspen and create a little added separation with the background.

Comments

7 comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on October 19, 2012 at 10:00 AM
I like the island of autumn color Brian. The composition works for me. Only minor suggestion is to have a little more room on the left edge. Beautiful autumn scene none the less.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Brad Strong on October 19, 2012 at 10:48 AM
I like the colors and that your composition places the brightest trees in the center. This keeps my attention in the image instead of pushing it away when there are highlights at the edges. It looks like a slight rotate to the left might be in order as most of the trees seem to be leaning right, strictly from a perspective standpoint. I usually level my tripod and then rotate slightly in processing for the best perceptual feel.

There is a couple of minor edge distractions along the bottom. Lower left corner has a little yellow foliage in it that you might consider de-saturating a bit as it stands out against the pine trees.There is also a small inclusion of orange foliage at the bottom along the pine trees that you might consider cloning to look like the pine trees. They are pretty minor, but the final image will be better for it.

The whole image would benefit from a little brightening IMO. I know it was overcast, but that isn't evident in the image, so the image will be judged as though it was underexposed.
Registered on October 1, 2012, 43 Posts, 302 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on October 19, 2012 at 11:42 AM
I love this one. Beautiful autumn scene.
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Smorra on October 19, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Beautiful fall colors here Brian. I really like how many different yellow tones you captured here. I agree with Brad about the trees all leaning to the right. Maybe a bit of CCW rotation would balance it out.
Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 20, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Brian,

A lovely autumn image. I agree with most of Brads points - a good summary of suggestions.

As far as the composition, it's solid. Not meant to be critical, but generically speaking the comp is a static one. what I mean is that it's not like a near/far composition - everything here in in the same plane so to speak. The composition is based on the arrangement of elements within the scene. And I think you've done well in selecting and framing those elements - and considering Brads good suggestions.

Color, saturation and luminosity looks great

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on October 21, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Sorry I'm late to the party, Brian. :wavey:

Hmmm, I think I know this spot. :biggrin: I really like this. I see the "s" in the composition as giving it flow and motion. And, the large version shows how much clarity and detail you have in the shot. A slight vignette will help the edge elements Brad mentioned. And, my personal taste would call for a minor amount of sat and contrast, particularly in the mid-tones. I think it's a well done image, Brian!
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on October 21, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Thanks everyone for the constructive comments. I appreciate the feedback!! :wavey:
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