March of the Aspen
by Brian Schrayer
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Here's an image from my recent fall color trip to Colorado. My work schedule has been busy since I returned so I haven't participated much - hopefully I'll have a little more time for a while.
All honest comments and critiques are welcome.
I am particularly interested in your thoughts on the composition. I personally like it, but I'm interested in other's thoughts.
D700
112mm
f13; 1/160 sec.
ISO 200
Polarizer
Diffused light from overcast skies from passing storm.
Processing:
1. RAW Conversion
2. Curves adjustment layer with slight s-curve for global contrast
3. Slight vignette to further emphasize the aspen and create a little added separation with the background.
Comments
7 commentsThere is a couple of minor edge distractions along the bottom. Lower left corner has a little yellow foliage in it that you might consider de-saturating a bit as it stands out against the pine trees.There is also a small inclusion of orange foliage at the bottom along the pine trees that you might consider cloning to look like the pine trees. They are pretty minor, but the final image will be better for it.
The whole image would benefit from a little brightening IMO. I know it was overcast, but that isn't evident in the image, so the image will be judged as though it was underexposed.
A lovely autumn image. I agree with most of Brads points - a good summary of suggestions.
As far as the composition, it's solid. Not meant to be critical, but generically speaking the comp is a static one. what I mean is that it's not like a near/far composition - everything here in in the same plane so to speak. The composition is based on the arrangement of elements within the scene. And I think you've done well in selecting and framing those elements - and considering Brads good suggestions.
Color, saturation and luminosity looks great
Lon
Hmmm, I think I know this spot.