Autumn Parade
by Youssef Ismail
Thank you for the feedback on the grass and leaf photo. I also made the other variations to it, one horizontal from the same perspective and then two others with the grass patterns moving generally diagonally through the frame. The one I posted I thought was the best. Maybe later I'll post the others as a comparison.
Now earlier in the morning on the day I made the grass photo, I had wandered to the extreme west end of the El Captian meadow and met up with the Merced river. It was very slow moving and had this faint mist floating above the water. I could not find anything however that appealed to me so I continued to wander until I found that grass.
Later, once El Capitan was being lit by the rising sun, its warm light started to reflect back onto the meadow. I wandered back to the river where I was earlier and found Lon photographing the river and these trees. We have yet to see what Lon captured, as I am sure it will be a joy to see, only now I liked the light on these trees and grass on the opposite bank much more, enough for me to burn two sheets of film to created this stitched panoramic.
I do wish it was just a bit wider than high to fit the traditional 3:1 panoramic format, but its close to 2.5:1.
4x5, Nikkor 150mm, I failed to record the aperture and shutter ?!?!?, Fuji Provia 100F. Stitched in CS5. Does it look too saturated?
The two sheets were exposed by performing an extreme shift of the back standard hoping to keep the focus unchanged between sheets. It seems to have worked well.
Your comments and thoughts appreciated.
Comments
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John
Jagdeep Rajput
I would say the sat is high, but not blown out per se. But, it would be worth a slight turn down IMO to see how things look, especially with the FG yellow grasses. Actually, these are some really nice strong yellows for Provia too.
What a gorgeous pano over the Merced! I'm quite angry with myself now because I never once considered that possibility. And yes, I do have an image coming up (mayb #21?) It won't hold a candle to this one though, that's for certain.
Love the image Youssef, but you asked about saturation. Saturation wise, I don't think it's too strong, but what I do see is a much stronger yellow/red cast to the overall color balance. Maybe it's just me since no one else has mentioned it, but I can see pulling back on the red channel and even adding some blue to reduce the yellow. I notice it mostly in the pine trunks, as well as the grassy, forest floor as you get deeper in to the image. I certainly think the yellow/orange in the oaks and grass right along the river look good cause those are suppose to be yellow, so it's not so noticeable. anyway, that's just my observation.
I just think it's amazing and uncanny how we can stand right in front of the same scene and come away with such different interpretations - as evidenced here as well as the time we all spent near Fern spring down in the river bed. Amazing stuff, and of course a GOOD thing, we all don't see the same way, that would be quite boring.
Love the image Youssef. If it were mine, I'd be tweaking the color a bit.
Lon
Chris