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Canyon Gloaming
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Canyon Gloaming

by Kory Lidstrom

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 14, 2013176 views6 comments
This is from October 2012 on the White Rim Trail in Canyonlands National Park. Despite the vast majority of the trail being desert, there are a couple of oases near the river -- that's where this image was made.

I was drawn to this cute little Cottonwood tree and with its leaves half changed over to fall color.

5DMK2, f/16, 40mm, Several exposures blended by hand for dynamic range and DOF.

Comments

6 comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on January 14, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Looks like a wonderful place. I like the matching yellow of the rabbitbush (I think) and the cottonwood as well as the distant cliff. To me, the blue in the sky seems too intense, but otherwise this does a fine job of putting me right there.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on January 14, 2013 at 5:42 PM
Very nice. I like the dark presentation here and the array of colors from top to bottom. That cottonwood stands nicely against the red cliffs and the foreground brush accents the tree nicely.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on January 14, 2013 at 7:55 PM
I like the contrast of the tree against the canyon wall as well as the way that the color in the foreground complements the tree and reinforces it as the main subject. The color in the sky is beautiful as well.

I am curious to know your reasoning for positioning the tree in the center of the frame since it defies convention. I don't say that to be critical or to point out the "rules of composition". I personally think it works as it places the emphasis on the tree as your main subject. I'm interested in your rationale more from the perspective of learning as I have been reading more on composition and thinking about it more critically in my own photography. :wavey:
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 14, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Kory,

Great to see a post from you. With a couple minor thoughts I'll mention shortly, I'm really liking this. I like how the yellows/greens and plant at the bottom work together with the clouds up top to frame this lovely desert landscape. Almost like a natural vignette. And I can't speak for you, but perhaps this may help with Brian's question too. It's because of that natural and chosen framing that the centered cottonwood absolutely works, at least IMHO.

The only small nit or observation I have is that the cyan is a little strong in places. Most notably in the slopes of the bg mountain/mesa, but also in the much smaller details of some of the dried brush, which to me would be more gray. And then the blue in the sky is just ever so slightly electric, but certainly within one's personal choice and interpretation.

I like this image more, the more I look at it. Wish there was a larger view!

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on January 15, 2013 at 9:35 AM
The lower two thirds of the image frames that tree really nice against a beautifully dark background, though I feel like the sky (although nicely colored) is doing it's own thing, mainly because of the separation between the two and high contrast. There's certainly an almost-square crop eliminating the sky I like here too, that could absolutely be worth more exploration of this spot in different light. The balance of colors in this rendition feels good to me though, even the cyan doesn't feel all that off to my eye.
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on January 16, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Thanks for the comments, guys.

Regarding the cyan, I agree that the image got a tad oversaturated when I converted it for web use. So, here is a slightly less saturated version.

Brian: I went with the tree in the center because, if I tried any other composition, the bushes in the foreground and the peak in the background would not line up with the tree. This exact spot is the ONLY spot around that had such nice flowers in the foreground.

Marc, regarding the sky, you're correct: the cloud placement is not optimal. But that's because it's a national park and we were only registered at this campsite for a single night and thus this is the only chance I got at this image. With enough days out there, I'm sure I could've gotten a more conducive sky. Although, it might take a LOT of days, since most of the time, the sky is Boring Blue out there. In a way, I was lucky to get any clouds at all.
Registered on November 19, 2008, 49 Posts, 1035 Comments