Canyon Gloaming
by Kory Lidstrom
This is from October 2012 on the White Rim Trail in Canyonlands National Park. Despite the vast majority of the trail being desert, there are a couple of oases near the river -- that's where this image was made.
I was drawn to this cute little Cottonwood tree and with its leaves half changed over to fall color.
5DMK2, f/16, 40mm, Several exposures blended by hand for dynamic range and DOF.
Comments
6 commentsI am curious to know your reasoning for positioning the tree in the center of the frame since it defies convention. I don't say that to be critical or to point out the "rules of composition". I personally think it works as it places the emphasis on the tree as your main subject. I'm interested in your rationale more from the perspective of learning as I have been reading more on composition and thinking about it more critically in my own photography.
Great to see a post from you. With a couple minor thoughts I'll mention shortly, I'm really liking this. I like how the yellows/greens and plant at the bottom work together with the clouds up top to frame this lovely desert landscape. Almost like a natural vignette. And I can't speak for you, but perhaps this may help with Brian's question too. It's because of that natural and chosen framing that the centered cottonwood absolutely works, at least IMHO.
The only small nit or observation I have is that the cyan is a little strong in places. Most notably in the slopes of the bg mountain/mesa, but also in the much smaller details of some of the dried brush, which to me would be more gray. And then the blue in the sky is just ever so slightly electric, but certainly within one's personal choice and interpretation.
I like this image more, the more I look at it. Wish there was a larger view!
Lon
Regarding the cyan, I agree that the image got a tad oversaturated when I converted it for web use. So, here is a slightly less saturated version.
Brian: I went with the tree in the center because, if I tried any other composition, the bushes in the foreground and the peak in the background would not line up with the tree. This exact spot is the ONLY spot around that had such nice flowers in the foreground.
Marc, regarding the sky, you're correct: the cloud placement is not optimal. But that's because it's a national park and we were only registered at this campsite for a single night and thus this is the only chance I got at this image. With enough days out there, I'm sure I could've gotten a more conducive sky. Although, it might take a LOT of days, since most of the time, the sky is Boring Blue out there. In a way, I was lucky to get any clouds at all.