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Spotlight

by Barb Pflaum

Gallery: Weekly ChallengePosted February 7, 201389 views4 comments
It was early evening and I was driving back to a cabin I was renting in Fennville, MI. I saw this interesting spotlight effect over Lake Michigan which I assume was caused by the way the sun was shining through the clouds.

Canon XTi, f/11,1/400 sec., ISO 200, 18mm focal length

Comments

4 comments
Comment posted by Allen Brooks on February 8, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Nice capture of the sun rays and the reflection on the water. I like the foreground trees and the way the rays draw the eye towards the tree. I might consider cropping out the foliage on the top.
Registered on July 27, 2011, 262 Posts, 2597 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on February 8, 2013 at 12:56 PM
I just love crepuscular rays (the technical term for those sun rays, :wink:) and this is a fine example. The diagonal eye flow along those ray to the tree silhouettes is good also. I too find the limbs intruding at the top distracting. I wonder what this would look like from a lower point of view. That would raise the intruding branches at the top out of the frame, reduce how much of the frame is occupied by the water, and possibly create an even stronger diagonal between the sun and the foreground tree on the right.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on February 8, 2013 at 1:34 PM
That really is an interesting spotlight out there! Like everyone else, I live the rays, but not the twigs on top. I had the same thought as Mark about shooting this from a lower angle, but sometimes private property or the lack of climbing gear gets in the way of the ideal point of view. :wink:
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by Carolyn Derstine on February 8, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Very nicely captured sun rays, Barb. I like the sun path on the water too. The comp is good with the tree grouping on the right. Re the other branches, I think you were trying to make a frame using these which I think could be a good idea. But in this case, I probably would agree with others about getting rid of the top edge branches (but not the sky?). And possibly those branches on the left too, leaving the trees on the right to balance out the sun and sun path. What a lovely scene that would be to come upon! :smile:
Registered on February 16, 2011, 610 Posts, 3684 Comments