Gallery: FloraPosted March 29, 201345 views7 comments
This site has so improved my vision and direction.
D80, tripod, ISO200, F5 @ 1/30 sec.
Comments and critique sought for improvement. Thanks.
Bob
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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on March 29, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Needs more DOF.
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on March 29, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Robert: A touch more DOF perhaps but this is well seen and composed. I like how you managed the plane of focus and the color contrast between subject and BG. Nicely done.>=))>
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Comment posted by Albert Darmo on March 29, 2013 at 10:26 PM
Hi Robert beautifully composed, with great color and lines, agree about the DOF
Albert Darmo
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Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on March 30, 2013 at 5:01 AM
Pretty elegant comp, a background in nice contrast to the subject. Love how the subject picks up the light to give the golden glow. I notice the dof, too, but oh, so close.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Eirini Pajak on March 30, 2013 at 6:46 AM
The lighting on this is really beautiful! I really like the gold against the gray...seems like there is a little too much extra space on the sides...it is cropped so close on the top & bottom so it feels more balanced to me if the sides came in closer too. Nicely seen!
Registered on December 13, 2011, 216 Posts, 1671 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on March 31, 2013 at 9:55 PM
Ditto more dof, but great light!
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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on April 2, 2013 at 10:14 AM
The warm glow of the grass is great and I like the combination of sparse stalks filling much of the frame. I would like to see some more space at the top, to better go with the space along the sides.
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