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Light Catchers+ Repost

by Peter Coskun

Gallery: LandscapePosted July 21, 2013672 views27 comments
After various trial and error working on this image, I finally decided this may be the best of the edits. The first edit seemed too cramped, then I tried a vertical which seemed overpowering with the cacti, and then I came to this where I gave some breathing room to the cholla and tried to even the light out a bit. This is a blend of two exposures for dynamic range photographed in the superstition mountains after a passing monsoon storm. This view overlooks the goldfield mountains, an area which I plan on exploring much more of in the future. As always, comments and critiques appreciated.

Canon 7d
Canon 17-40mm@17mm
f14
ISO 100
15 sec + 2 sec exposure
Tripod

Comments

27 comments
Comment posted by Ben Horne on July 21, 2013 at 9:41 PM
This is a very well executed shot Peter. You handled this difficult exposure very well.
Registered on August 27, 2009, 51 Posts, 959 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 21, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Ben, the blend was actually the easy part for once. It's amazing how easy they seamed together when looking at both images. Glad it all worked out though.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Johan Eickmeyer on July 21, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Holy smokes! Perfect. Nothing to change.

Where's the print button? :toast:

Great work Peter, thanks for posting.
Registered on March 25, 2013, 36 Posts, 164 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 21, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Haha thanks Johan. Not 100% sure on this one for print yet, there seemed to be a bit of noise in both files, but I think I could manage 20x30 and retain all the detail.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Zhoen on July 21, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Wow…Love the dreamy foreground and sharp background. May be one of your best I’ve seen from your recent posts.
Registered on May 16, 2013, 25 Posts, 188 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on July 21, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Now that, them, there, is some glow ya'all! :biggrin: :toast:
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by Dean Sauskojus on July 21, 2013 at 11:46 PM
WOW! Gorgeous shot Peter. Love the glow coming off the cactus and nice colors in the sky. Very nice. :toast:
Registered on September 29, 2009, 137 Posts, 2659 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on July 22, 2013 at 12:13 AM
Peter I am liking this one a lot. I do have a couple suggestions to make this even better IMO. First I would pull back on the orton type effect on the FG chollas. Second would be to either darken that entire bush next to the cactus to the left of center or brighten the top portion to match the bottom. It's very green on the bottom but much darker towards the top, perhaps from the blend. The glow over the mountains is sweet. Nice job.
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on July 22, 2013 at 12:57 AM
Spectacular light capture here Peter. Love the glow in the cacti an beautiful sky.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 22, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Thank you everyone!

Zack- For some reason the Orton appears a lot stronger on here than it does posted elsewhere (I'm guessing compression since I had to size this down a bit to post). When I use the Orton effect, I brush over the landscape at 50% first and then small steps down from there in case there are any hiccups. In this case, I used a 20% opacity over the entire image and then brushed over the landscape once at 50% allowing only 10% glow on the cacti. They were already glowing in the RAW file and if I pushed the Orton any further than that it looked far too glowy. I also see what you mean with the greens. That is something I could probably tone down a bit as well as the brush on the lower right.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Hamed Musharbak on July 22, 2013 at 3:14 AM
wonderful light & glow
Registered on June 1, 2009, 372 Posts, 2282 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on July 22, 2013 at 4:14 AM
This is just outstanding. The depth both in terms of focus and dynamic range and color is wonderful and brings me right into the photo. What an amazing moment to have experienced and captured. Really well done.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on July 22, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Well that sure is pretty :)

aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Cameron on July 22, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Gorgeous. Perhaps the cacti glow a little too much and perhaps they are half a stop light on the shadow side but I love the composition and overall lighting going on as a whole. Really great shot.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on July 22, 2013 at 10:53 AM
A really nice comp with the eye directed through the center of the image. And, the light is sweet. I agree on a pull back on the Orton on the foreground needles, but that's my only suggestion. Beautiful scene.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on July 22, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful glowing light throughout this image. Excellent exposure. I like that the light on the cholla spines seems to have about the same intensity of the light over the mountains. Gives this a very nicely balanced feel.
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on July 22, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Looks good Peter, per your style. The cholla and nice saguaro in the middle look like possibilities for another evening.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on July 22, 2013 at 3:51 PM
I'd be really tempted to crop this off the bottom or darken the lowest cactus areas a bit. The trouble with Chollas is always the same - knowing where to crop them off. I feel like the green in the cactus is a little bit on the unnatural side given the lighting, but a minor point. The Orton amount doesn't bother me. The background is stunning, though I think you could balance it a tad more by brushing on some more warmth and color at right.
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 22, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Thank you everyone, I appreciate the suggestions.

Marc- You make a very good point about cropping cholla. It's no wonder I have the most difficult time using them into a composition, but to me they are simply the most incredible cacti to photograph as they are extremely photogenic (backlit or not).

I'll have to get around to adjusting that green and introducing a little more warmth to the scene. I'll get a re-post up as soon as possible.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Here is a quick re-post that hopefully took care of the green cast. Warmed it up a bit more and darkened the foreground cholla.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Cameron on July 22, 2013 at 6:06 PM
The repost is far superior Peter. superb in fact.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Pelton on July 22, 2013 at 8:04 PM
The chollas really stand out in this soft lighting. I love the composition with the saguaro on the horizon. And the upper sky is wonderfully colorful. Very nice!, Peter.
Registered on November 25, 2003, 380 Posts, 4647 Comments
Comment posted by Shane McDermott on July 22, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Wonderful comp here, all the elements seem to pull together nicely. My critique would be that it feels just a tiny bit "washed", really just a little. Consider bringing more contrast into the mid tone purples and oranges. Otherwise I like the correction to the greens and cholla.

Well executed!

Shane
Registered on November 12, 2007, 49 Posts, 1074 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on July 23, 2013 at 1:09 AM
Thank you Ian, Mark, and Shane. I'll probably punch the contrast a bit when I send this to get printed, whenever that may be. Thanks again for all your suggestions!
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Reid on July 23, 2013 at 1:46 AM
The repost is stunning Peter. Beautiful sky and the Chollas just glow. Beautifully done. :toast:
Registered on January 27, 2013, 65 Posts, 2460 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on July 28, 2013 at 8:27 AM
The repost shows why this critique forum is so useful. Stunning work.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Fred Weymouth on August 1, 2013 at 8:32 AM
Great work. This is one of the best I've seen of the AZ desert - the glow in the cholla really tops it off.
Registered on December 29, 2006, 36 Posts, 62 Comments