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by Greg Morris

Gallery: AvianPosted January 29, 2015113 views11 comments
This is a Red-shouldered Hawk that I have seen near my house over the last few weeks. I've been able to get quite a few pictures of it as it hunted and flew around. Here the hawk has eyed some lunch and left its perch of about 12ft up. It sat in the field for a very short time and then flew away with out anything it its claws. I assume it missed or ate something very small before taking flight again. I am new to photography, but have recently taken quite a few pictures around my area in SW Oklahoma. I have been looking at all the fine pictures on this website and have been hesitant to post, but I am interested in getting better, so I appreciate any and all critiques and criticisms.

I know the BG is busy, but I haven't gotten into cloning yet.

I did minimal adjustments in LR5 and a small crop removed some area off the right side of the pic, not much at all.

Canon 7D MII, Tamron 150-600, 1/1000, 7.1, ISO 250, 600mm, no flash.

Hope that's enough info.
Thanks,
Greg

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by John Tobias on January 29, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Even with the busy BG the hawk is nicely shown. It does look well exposed, but it is a bit soft. Did you hand hold, use a monopod or tripod? You have nice detail in the hawk, and a good pose you caught it in. Thanks for sharing.
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Greg Morris on January 29, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Thanks for the input John. I was using a beanbag on my window. I may have forgotten to shut the engine off.
Registered on January 23, 2015, 38 Posts, 104 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Thompson on January 29, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Hi Greg, welcome! Great pose from the hawk. The background is busy as you say and even if you were into cloning it would be challenging with all the branches intersecting the bird. The light and composition look good to me. Nice shot!
Registered on August 7, 2014, 125 Posts, 2319 Comments
Comment posted by Keith Bauer on January 29, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Greg: Welcome to NPN. Thanks for posting.

I think you've hit most of the issues. The background is very busy. It would not be worth cloning in my opinion. The bird is a bit soft, especially evident in the larger version. At 1/1000 I'm guessing it isn't camera shake. Looks like focus tracking was off just a bit. Close, but not quite as sharp as we all hope for. Still a good effort.

We look forward to more of your images, and having your comments on other photographers work.
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Comment posted by John Robinson on January 29, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Hi Welcome Greg
All been said I reckon.
Cheers
John
Registered on March 2, 2008, 535 Posts, 2453 Comments
Comment posted by Matt Williams on January 29, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Hi Greg,
These red shouldered hawks make beautiful subjects with their splotches of white, red shoulder patches and bi-colored bills. We have a few in the winter in my neck of the woods here in Indiana too, but it isn't very often I get a chance to get a photo. From what you said, I'm not sure if you did much sharpening in your processing? If not, you might try some selective sharpening on the bird and see if that helps. If not, it sounds like he may hang around and give you another chance at a sharper shot.
Registered on January 21, 2015, 5 Posts, 10 Comments
Comment posted by Jerry Austin on January 30, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Hi Greg. Welcome to NPN. This is a great place to learn, so keep posting and be prepared to learn a lot. This is a really nice first post. Getting a stellar image of a flying bird is not easy, even for very experienced photographers. I really like the position of the hawk and the fact that you can see his talons. The color pattern on the wings is clearly visible and that is very nice. The background is what it is. You will find that there are NPN members that like natural shots like this and some that like a cleaner background. You will also find purists and cloners (smile). I do find the image a little soft. This could be for two reasons. The Tamron at 600mm is softer than at the smaller focal lengths. Also, the shutter speed of 1/1000s may not have been fast enough to entirely freeze the action. I have a 7D Mark II. I have found that I can bump the ISO to 1600 with little to no noise. So, you might be aware that you can bump the ISO a bit to gain more shutter speed which will ensure that slow shutter speed is not a contributor to soft images. Overall, well done. I also encourage you to post comments, even if you don't think you are qualified just yet. All comments are welcome and valued.
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Comment posted by Greg Morris on January 30, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thanks everyone for the words of encouragement. I will bump that ISO up and see if I can attain a sharper image.

Jerry (or anyone), would it be better to leave my lens around 400mm, then do more cropping in post?

Thanks again,
Greg
Registered on January 23, 2015, 38 Posts, 104 Comments
Comment posted by Jerry Austin on January 30, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Greg,

That's something you will have to determine for yourself after you get more familiar with your lens an camera combination.

Jerry
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Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on January 31, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Hi Greg, welcome to NPN! The others have covered things well, so I'll just chime in about your last question. It's best to minimize cropping to the greatest extent possible, as greater cropping generally results in more visible noise and less fine detail. I'm not familiar with the lens you're using, so you'll have to experiment to see if it's worth backing off on the focal length or not. Best solution of all (and the hardest but most rewarding) is to study your subjects, learn their habits, be patient, and eventually get close enough for that perfect shot.
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Comment posted by Greg Morris on January 31, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Thanks, Brian and Jerry for responding. I am learning to get closer. Pelicans are more interesting than I ever knew.
Registered on January 23, 2015, 38 Posts, 104 Comments