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Black Turnstone and repost
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Black Turnstone and repost

by Allen Brooks

Gallery: AvianPosted April 3, 2015101 views4 comments
I came upon a dozen Black Turnstones amongst the rocks along the Oregon coast early one morning. It looked as if they had recently woken and were busy preening themselves. I was able to get fairly close, hiding behind a large rock.

I also added, below, another group flying off showing their distinctive wing pattern.

Canon 7D
100-400 mm at 260 mm
1/320 at f7.1
ISO 400

Thanks for looking. Comments and critiques appreciated.

Comments

4 comments
Comment posted by Allen Brooks on April 3, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Registered on July 27, 2011, 262 Posts, 2597 Comments
Comment posted by John Launstein on April 4, 2015 at 4:14 AM
Wow--a lot of "pop" in this one, Allen! I've never seen a Turnstone to my knowledge, but they're on my list now! :wink:

Phenomenal feather detail, killer blues in the background, and I like both the pose and the angle of light. This does feel a bit over-saturated, and over-sharpened to me, but honestly I'm still getting used to my new monitor so I'd see what others think as well. For me, the whites in the back have shifted to kind of a violet-blue, and the water, as attractive as it is, feels a bit unnatural (better on the larger version, however).

Also, it looks like you've done some masking where the rock's edge meets the water. If this isn't the case, I'd still take a look at that area as something doesn't look right there. For one, the edge is sharper than the rock details in that region, but there's also a few artifacts above the water "line" it appears. It's a cool frame in any event so certainly worth a little extra effort IMO! :smile:
Registered on April 5, 2011, 223 Posts, 1193 Comments
Comment posted by Allen Brooks on April 4, 2015 at 9:54 AM
John, Thanks for your comments. There was a blue color cast over the rocks and bird and in removing it I missed the area on the back. I've reposted desaturating the blue water and brightening it overall.
Registered on July 27, 2011, 262 Posts, 2597 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 4, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Nice, Allen. The repost is a significant improvement. I like the over-the-shoulder look and the colors are awesome. The whites look like they might be a little hot along the edge of the breast that's showing. If you could hold them down when you brighten the rest for the repost I think it would be even better.

:toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments