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Dreams of Winter+Update

by Ryan Shain

Gallery: LandscapePosted May 9, 2015340 views21 comments

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This image has been chosen for the Gallery showing

This is an intimate view of my time up in the UP of Michigan. I was admiring the pure rolling hills of the winter snow, and was looking for an element to compliment these pure snow hills. I was wearing snow shows in probably 40 inches of snow, so i imagine this is a top of a tree protruding from the snow. I was very mesmerized by the texture of the snow, and how wonderful it looked untouched. I hope I communicated this feeling to the viewer.

This image actually took quite of bit of processing to get the look I saw in the field.   I would very much appreciate any input on this image that you think could help it out. I have submitted it to a gallery showing, and I will know tomorrow if it is selected, along with some other images. I have been perfecting the print of it, but I feel more input would be very helpful, and I would love feed back from y'all. cool

 

Thank you in advance for any time y'all can give me on this image

 

Canon 70d, f11, 1/50th sec, ISO 100 tripod and release cable procssing with luminosity masks, and I believe a bit of Orton effect

Comments

21 comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on May 9, 2015 at 7:54 PM

Ryan, how neat is this small scene !! This is just super. The snow surrounding the tree is really what makes this work so well. Although the tree is the main subject it's the extremely delicate rolling snow mounds that brings the best out in being able to isolate the view of this tree.

All looks exceptionally nice to me and should work well for print usage too. Good luck with the overall print selection process tomorrow......it's already a winner IMO. devil

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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on May 9, 2015 at 8:07 PM

I like this one very much as well, Ryan. There is a wonderful luminosity to that show and it's variability. This would have worked for me even without the tree but the tree adds a different dimension. Hopefully the gallery will like it as much as I do. Good job.

Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Tom Falley on May 9, 2015 at 8:35 PM

 

Ryan:

The simpler the image the more perfect it must be. It would be great to see the print, one has so much finer control over the final presentation. This worked very well, isolating the feminine curves of the snow in juxtopisition to the stark hardness and color of the evergreen. Colorballance and composition is quite good. I hope the gallery has equally as good taste as the members here!

Regards:    Tom

Registered on November 21, 2014, 189 Posts, 454 Comments
Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on May 9, 2015 at 8:51 PM

This is lovely, Ryan - simple yet powerfully evovative. Very well crafted!!!

Registered on December 2, 2014, 278 Posts, 1736 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on May 9, 2015 at 10:20 PM

The texture of the snow mounds and the gentle shading all make this one exceptional image, Ryan.  I am sure you've played with bringing out the subtle shadows and the lines of the mounds.  I think, as a very subtle improvement, I might play with the upper left and that last small mound.  No matter, this is most excellent and good luck with the selection.  

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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on May 10, 2015 at 12:21 AM

Perfect!  Composition and contrast are on-target here.  Good eye and excellent development.

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Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on May 10, 2015 at 4:29 AM

This is really nice Ryan! The subtle shades and shapes in the snow that are interrupted by that lonely tree sticking out from the snow. For me, this really tells a story about perseverence and survival that is much needed in nature.

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Comment posted by Jean C Cajolet on May 10, 2015 at 7:35 AM

Simple, powerfull and extremely well done. I am living in winter country and it is my dream to capture a scene like that. I like it a lot. 

Registered on April 28, 2014, 53 Posts, 532 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on May 10, 2015 at 9:35 AM

I really like the soft curves of the snow mounds Ryan.  The helpless tree adds a lot of interest for me.

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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on May 10, 2015 at 9:38 AM

Excellent!  I love the soft lines and the simplicity of it.  No suggestions, looks outstanding as is.  Good luck with the showing.

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Comment posted by Jeff Hackett on May 10, 2015 at 10:24 AM

Beautiful subtle shadows!  Ver nice work Ryan!

 

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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on May 10, 2015 at 10:59 PM

Beautiful shot Ryan, and the processing looks dead on perfect perfect to me. The shadows are perfectly placed to show off the sensuous lines in the snow and the splash of green is very nice.

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Comment posted by Jeff Martyka on May 11, 2015 at 11:56 AM

Seriously great day out exploring on unbroken trails.  That windy lake was awful, but these snow humps were pure magic.

I like the inclusion of that horizontal curve into the tree at the base.  Nice work on the tree as well.  That's where I've struggled and left my image in the to be edited as I gain skills.

I think you can improve the blending of the shadows going under the tree from the left at the dead branches and the middle.  They feel a bit light under the tree when I look at the continuation of shadows on the right. Could be the full size image is smoother there, though.

Hope the gallery makes the right decision and chooses your work!  

 

 

Registered on June 20, 2014, 30 Posts, 155 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on May 11, 2015 at 12:02 PM

Ryan, don't you know it's almost summer...enlightened  This pine really stands out well against the snow.  The combination of it's lean and the waves of snow make a very artistic view.  I wouldn't change a thing.

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Comment posted by D.A. Edwards on May 11, 2015 at 3:49 PM

Beautiful stuff, Ryan, nicely seen and rendered. I was wondering about cropping the two shadows on the top edge but when I do the browser crop on them it doesn't seem to improve the image so it's probably best to maintain your vision for this. Love it.

Registered on October 8, 2014, 226 Posts, 1187 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on May 13, 2015 at 11:02 AM

Ryan, I'm really enjoying this one!! Great composition and wonderful idea to shoot it like this. It is simple and very effective. I like your processing just as is on this. Beautiful work friend! 

Nick Bristol                                                                                                                                                                             Lone Rock, WI

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Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on May 14, 2015 at 10:23 PM

Congrats on the weekly pick, Ryan - I really love this image!

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Comment posted by Ryan Shain on May 14, 2015 at 10:43 PM

Thank you so much everyone for the thoughts on this image, and again I really appreciate all the support. This image has been chosen to be shown at the Gallery, and I am excited.

 

Thanks Alberto!!!!!!

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Comment posted by Gary McGhee on May 15, 2015 at 9:10 AM

Well done on the gallery showing Ryan, easy to see why it was selected. I love the simplicity and repeating shapes in the snow. Congrats.

Gary.

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Comment posted by Luke Ormand on May 15, 2015 at 9:54 AM

Stunning from every aspect.  The vision you had to create this image is incredible.

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Comment posted by gary phillips on May 22, 2015 at 1:41 PM

Unique and very special, Ryan.  Congrats on WP and the gallery selection.  Exquisite!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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