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Mono Lake Afternoon
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Mono Lake Afternoon

by Preston Birdwell

Gallery: LandscapePosted September 11, 2015210 views9 comments

Here is another of my 'found in the archive' B&W images. It was made in 1982 or 1983, as far as I can recall.

It was a lovely, and stormy, afternoon at Mono Lake.

Omega View 45E
Schneider-Xenar 210mm​
Tri-X B&W negative
TK's masks, a couple of gradient layers, and various bits of dodge/burn.

Please see the larger version. Thanks!

Your thoughts are always appreciated. cool

--P

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on September 11, 2015 at 5:45 PM

Real nice Preston. I would not mind a bit more room at the top for the white puffies, but very minor. Nice layering and depth and the processing looks good.

Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Matthew Goldberg on September 11, 2015 at 9:54 PM

Hi Preston,

Great choice for B&W in this photo.  The clouds are certainly highlighted by this decision.  The clouds stand out the most to me, and the land is multi-layered -- foreground, followed by the desert and mountains in the farthest distance.  I also like how you concentrated on the land vs. the sky -- nearly 70% of the frame by my calculation is land, the other 30% = sky.  

Registered on August 24, 2015, 7 Posts, 16 Comments
Comment posted by Jeffrey Sipress on September 11, 2015 at 11:14 PM

Nice imaging, Preston. A classic scene of the west.   Looks like the lake was lower then.

Registered on February 17, 2004, 236 Posts, 1197 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on September 12, 2015 at 12:11 AM

Beautiful image Preston. I like the contrasty fg shrubs, the tufas, and the sky. The interplay between the contrasty fg and the high toned sky makes it for me. The middle ground is a bit dull. I'm wondering the slightly darkening that middleground could add a bit more drama? I like how it offsets the tuffa. The clouds look super.

Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on September 12, 2015 at 10:18 AM

devil...........the analog types at APUG would love this one, Preston. It's just super IMO.......laugh

Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on September 12, 2015 at 5:13 PM

Nice Preston.  Looks to like the lake hasn't changed much since then.  I might vote for slightly less foreground and a bit more of those awesome clouds.  Sweet image from the archives regardless.

Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by David Schoen on September 13, 2015 at 9:24 AM

Interesting image Preston.  Good sky.  Mid tones need a boost and some pop.

 

Registered on November 6, 2006, 1213 Posts, 4587 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on September 14, 2015 at 4:49 PM

Preston, I like this image very much. For me the b&w Tri X worked very well I think your processing for this web version looks very nice. Fine just as is but I might prefer it with a little less foreground myself. Those clouds look wonderful. Nice work!

Nick Bristol                                                                                                                                                                             Lone Rock, WI

 

 

Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on September 14, 2015 at 9:58 PM

I'll cast another vote for less foreground.  I'm not sure how to get more interest in the mid-ground.  The tufas seem small, and my first thought was "get closer" but I also like the breadth here.  If there is a way to crop off some fg and get more pop on the distant ridges, that would make this stellar imho.

Registered on December 14, 2010, 122 Posts, 1034 Comments