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WC#716 Dusk ona Northern
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WC#716 Dusk ona Northern

by Jim Fairman

Gallery: Weekly ChallengePosted January 2, 201646 views2 comments
Dusk on a Northern Lake

taken w/Canon EOS 7D w 18-55 IS STM
settings     Av   f/5.6   1/2500  ISO 320  28mm

The shot was taken from the shore looking across the lake as the sun was beginning to set. As I was setting up, some bright light broke through cloud cover making a hot spot between the darkening clouds and the muted reds and oranges of the sunset. From those muted colours a glistening path was created across the lake towards the shore where a tree, bush and stump gave a natural frame for viewing.

This photo was previously posted and has been tweaked using with the suggestions of those who commented upon it . I also went back to the raw files and tried out the HDR function on the new LIghtroom v6.1.1. 

I would appreciate comments and suggestions on the whole and those doirected towards the results achieved using the HDR function.

Comments

2 comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on January 3, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Jim, this is a fine sunset view across this lake, with good colors in the sky and attractive reflections in the water.  I also like your framing.  As I looked at this, my initial reaction was that it lacked contrast, especially in the foreground grasses and the tree trunk on the right.  There's also some grey in the clouds above the hot spot that doesn't look quite right.  A look at your earlier post verifies these thoughts.  The lack of foreground contrast shows up as a lack of drama that to my eyes makes this version a gentler but less dramatic view.  When I do "HDR", I take multiple exposures in camera and then hand blend them in PS.  That lets me add in texture and color only in the areas where it was lacking in the base exposure.  If you want an example of my approach, go here where I blended in the sky from a -2 stop version along the "V" in the ridge line to cover an area that was blown in the main exposure.

I think you'll also find that you receive more comments when you do more commenting.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Minish on January 3, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Jim; The dynamic range of this kind of scene is usually so extreme that HDR processing of a single raw file will rarely be able to deal with it.  When I shoot sunsets with very strong direct sunlight, I always shoot multiple bracketed shots (usually at least 3) with the darkest exposed perfectly for the sky (sunlight) and the lightest exposed perfectly for the foreground and then do a BLEND rather than use HDR creation and mapping. The results are always more natural with a blend in my opinion.  I agree entirely with Mark's critique plus I have to add that the horizon is tilted pretty significantly CCW. 
Registered on February 4, 2006, 625 Posts, 3583 Comments