The perfect morning
by Roel Wijtmans
This is the same spot as were I took the "Aurora Cloudealis" photo, and after opening my tent I was very happy to finally having a nice sunrise after many, many grey mornings/days/evenings. What can you do, it's Iceland after all!
ISO 100, f/16, 1.6 s, 17 mm.
C&C welcome! Large version is included.
Roel
Comments
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Fabulous perspective and point of view - it feels like the river is coming right at you! You've got a wonderful and complimentary sky. I might try and drop the midtones in the sky a 1/2 stop or so, just taming it a little bit. Very minor.
As far as the tent goes, it helps tell a story and provide a sense of space as Preston eludes. Of course having the tent kinda kicks it out of fine art category... but then you did place it appropriately in M&N.
Lon
I might try burning the tent just a bit so it's closer in value to the brighter water. It's amazing how the color of a tent impacts the tentscape. Mine is green now and disappears in some settings. My yellow one is more sculptural. I've also had/have a cyan tent, an orange one, and a brown A-frame back in the day. They all look completely different without the fly which is a typical night here in CA.
I think it is wonderful how various images evoke differing reactions from those who post. The divergent posts help my thought process and expand how I look at images. I guess if we were to look at this image with intent, no pun intended, if artistic presentation is your sole objective, the tent should go. If you wish to tell a story and draw the viewer into your experience, the tent stays. I agree with a previous post about darkening the tent a bit. This shot has an additional optical effect for me. While the water is flowing toward the viewer, the line of the river draws me upstream and around the bend.