Light Veil
by Harley Goldman
Here is another image from that fine morning in Death Valley. It is a wider view and from a little different time in the morning than my previous B&W post. It was one heck of a great time watching those clouds put on their show.
D810, 70-200mm
Comments, critiques and suggestions are always welcome.
Comments
16 comments--P
This is very nice. You caught some great conditions - the hanging clouds and spotlighting on the mountains. If it were mine I would burn down that one bright area on the mountainside center left.
Certainly not a poll, but I do like the vision and power of the B&W better. Clouds make for so much excitement, and uncertainty!
Thanks for sharing! Tom
Ed
Albert Darmo
Canada
How fortunate you were to have been able to witness and participate in the cloud show. This is wonderful! Ok, so I think the b&w shows more drama, but this stands majestically on it's own. That line of gray clouds and shadow below the peaks is wonderful. I like the blue/brown combo of colors, and the color/sat look spot on.
Hard to find anything critical, but I try... ;-) This is very, very minor and maybe no one would think of this, or agree. But to me, I would slightly dodge the UL part of the sky/clouds. Yes, they are already dark gray given the conditions, but in a subtle way, I find my eye getting pulled to that upper left corner; it's slightly "heavy" relative to the light/exposure in the rest of the scene. Again, doesn't change my enjoyment of this, just a nitpicky observation and opinion.
Lon