Flows + Revision
by Vance Gese
A seasonal cascade along a fascinating rock found along the Savage River of Denali NP in Alaska several years ago. Was able to photograph this rock several times over the years I lived in Alaska, but on this occasion, soon after a good rainstorm, the small waterfall was flowing fairly well, seemingly mimicking the flowing designs in the rock. Would appreciate your thoughts or suggestions on this image.
Pentax 67 (wish I still had this great camera), 75mm, warm polarizer, Velvia. Flatbed scan, TK masks and such.
Larger size, detail image attached.
Thanks in advance for your suggestions, ideas, comments.
Comments
15 commentsThat is one gorgeous specimen of geologic time. No doubt it would be a favorite subject and to catch these conditions with the cascading water had to be special.
The 6x7 format works beautifully here in terms of the comp. For me though, and this is rare to have to offer a critique or suggestions on one of your images... but I'll go a step further from Gary's suggestion of burning the LRC and even go so far as cloning or dealing with the brightest little rock. For though, I'm unsure about the blue/cyan rock on the right edge. It's either I want more, or none because my eye is pulled there - and away from the cascades. I'm wondering about a crop of the aqua blue. This would leave a more vertical comp, which happens to coincide with the vertical nature of the cascades. But then again, that may not be your vision.
Colors are brilliant here. Love this Vance!
Lon
If you really want another Pentax 67, I bet you can pick one up for next to nothing these days. :)
The attached revision addresses all suggestions I believe (short of cropping the image). I toned down the cyans and blues on the right hand side, moving those tones more to gray, burned that same area a bit as well as the lower right hand corner rocks. I definitely want the cascade and the warm tones and lines of the rock to be the main focus. I did clone out a couple of tiny, white pebbles here and there that were distracting.
Ian and Harley, I have considered buying another Pentax 67 on many an occasion, usually after whining to my wife about the weight of the 4x5. Then I think that if I wait, just maybe the price of digital medium format will come down in price to something I could afford. Wishful thinking.
Thanks again for the comments.
Thanks for letting us know about the revised image. Awesome! Great thinking on simply reducing the blue/cyan rather than cropping! Why didn't I think of that?
Even small changes like that can make a world of difference. Great job!
Lon
Love it!
A very well-deserved EP!
Sandy