Gallery: LandscapePosted July 18, 2016200 views13 comments
This picture waqs taken a couple minutes before my brother Ed's recent post showing the changing light conditions.
Sugar Hill, NH
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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on July 18, 2016 at 10:43 AM
I see you put your time to good use while I was getting the truck turned around, Mike. The light in the sky is fantastic and I love the FG with the lupines and ferns. Beautifully done.
Ed
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on July 18, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Those are some of the biggest lupines I think I've ever seen. This is a really well composed picture. The foreground is well placed and fits well with the background. There's little to really add to improve this. I really like the young lupines in the very foreground. One thing to suggest is to tone down the bright green leaves at the very bottom edge of the frame. Bring them down to the level of the other greens around them. I don't if this would be a positive change but I might try making the blues in the lupines more luminous and then add saturation to make it the same as now. Right now they're about on the same tonal value as the greens and maybe some separation would be pleasing.
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Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on July 18, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Nice play of flowery prettiness vs cloudy moodiness. Wonderful colors
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on July 18, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Wonderfully composed image. I love the upside down v shape of the lupine, the v shape of the tree line, and the complementing v in the clouds. It all works beautifully. I like Igor's suggestion on luminosity. A little dodging might do the trick too.
ML
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Comment posted by Jeffrey Sipress on July 18, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Lovely imaging, Michael. I think the somewhat brighter few foreground leaves are fine and the rest of the foreground should be brought up to their level. The dark greens and flowers themselves are too dark.
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Comment posted by Matt Anderson on July 18, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Love those lupines!
Everything looks tack sharp.
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Comment posted by gary phillips on July 18, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Another really sweet image, Michael. I agree with Jeffrey, in that I would try to bring the luminance of the lupines up almost to level of those fore ferns. If you did nothing more, it still works very well. I might also tone down or even clone, the very bright highlight top left.
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Comment posted by Dan Kearl on July 18, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Very nice sky. I also think the lupines could go brighter.
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on July 18, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Michael, This looks just wonderful to me. A beautiful scene that you captured so well. Only thing I would do would be to tone down the bright area of sky in the upper left corner as already mentioned. I like the natural feel it has just as is.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
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Comment posted by scott lanz on July 18, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Beautiful, Michael. I like this a lot with the contrasting blue and orange colors. Very striking. I''ll just 2d Gary's suggestion re the ULC.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on July 21, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Amazing sky to go along with an amazing foreground Michael.
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Comment posted by John Williams on July 22, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Love it Michael. I'm a sucker for beautiful flowers and sky color. I too would work on the foreground and ulc luminance.
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Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on July 26, 2016 at 10:45 AM
This is outstanding, Michael. I think my favorite of the series. Very well composed and the colors are beautiful. Processing looks spot-on to me. Great work!
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ML
Everything looks tack sharp.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI