Better Days
by Richard Teller
I enjoy finding old abandoned buildings and wondering what the history is behind them. Time never stands still. Thanks for your comments and critiques.
Canon 7D
Canon 70-200 f4
Aperture Priority
Shutter 1/6
Aperture f8
ISO 400
100 mm
Tripod
Comments
3 commentsI like this as well and I too love the old buildings. You've done a great job in showcasing this by also including the trees and grasses. (I'm sure you spent some time here closer in as well...)
I like where Harley is going with his cloning suggestion. I'd take it a step further and crop in slightly from the left. I think there is a natural break between the trees on the left, and plus I'm not sure the extra view to the left bg adds to the image. At the same time, I'd crop slightly from the bottom to eliminate the brighter, slightly oof dried grass in the LRC.
Also, this doesn't jump right out, but all the reds (rusty metal parts) look a bit too saturated. But then again, it makes all those details come through.
Lon