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Leaving Behind

by Mattia Oliviero

Gallery: LandscapePosted April 19, 20171,209 views15 comments
I am exploring what the high tide leaves behind in the Dutch coast: shapes and lines, water, and light. This is my way to represent it. As always comments and suggestions are very much appreciated. 

Nikon d7000
Sigma 10-20mm @18mm
f11 - 1/4s- iso 100
tripod and polarizer

Comments

15 comments
Comment posted by Ronald Murphy on April 19, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Very nice! The colors, the shapes, the lines, everything.
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on April 19, 2017 at 11:00 AM

Mattia: I was really intrigued by the thumbnail regarding the strip on the top. Marvelous comp and light. Very well seen and captured.>=))>
 
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on April 19, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Very cool looking abstract. The colors and lines make it fascinating. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on April 19, 2017 at 5:40 PM
I like the leading lines and the textures in the image. Also very nice light. I would crop the bright colored bad of shore line off the top. It is a real eye catcher and takes away for the main subject.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on April 19, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Interesting, semi-abstract, Mattia. I like the flowing lines leading to the water, and the uneven near shore line. Although Bill was intrigued by the strip at the top, my thoughts about the top are similar to Richard's. I find the image stronger with the far shore cropped. 
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on April 19, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Fantastic shapes in the foreground sand gives this a wonderful abstract quality. I also think cropping the top bright band of sand results in a stronger image.
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on April 20, 2017 at 2:02 AM
Something disorientating about this.  Dig it.  Well seen!

aF
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on April 20, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Excellent artistic interpretation of a beach at a retreating tide. A creative composition that's really well done. It's both an abstract and not. Cropping out the sunny strip at the top would be a big mistake as it would destroy much of the vitality of the image IMO.
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Comment posted by gary phillips on April 21, 2017 at 12:14 AM
Really well seen, Mattia.  I think the image works with the sand line, but my first thought was to crop it.  It becomes a true abstract with the crop.  I can see Igor's point, but if it were mine, I would print it both ways, and let the effects sink in. Sweet image.
 
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Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on April 21, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Thank you for your precious comments. The disorienting feeling I think it is due to the fact that the sand in the foreground goes downhill. Without the bright shore would be another image with a very different mood. As Gary suggested, I think I will print both versions. 
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on April 21, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Wonderful abstract quality to this.  The leading lines of the sand work well, and the cool blues of the water surrounded by the warm yellows of the sand a nice combo.  Somewhat of a mind bender when I think about the actual story being told - looks like the water washing up on the beach in the distance, yet there is sand in the FG instead of water.  In regards to the top part of the sand, maybe darkening the very top, or slightly cropping it off. There may be some shadow created the surf on the far left that has created an inconsistency in tones along the water boarder up there.  Maybe delicate cloning in that area.  Overall very intriguing shot.
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Comment posted by David Schoen on April 22, 2017 at 12:25 PM
I really like this point of view looking at three different shapes, color, and textures.  Nicely abstract.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on April 22, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Mattia,

This is outstanding.  Yes, the thumbnail is a mysterious one with that strip of warm light at the top.  But it all becomes clear in the larger view.  What a wonderful nature abstract.  Kudos for exploring the leftovers of the high tide. Indeed worth exploring.

The texture, contrast, flow and lead-in of the sand is just fantastic.  And then there's the light. The timing is great with the direct light above, and then the very subtle lighting of the sand below.  This is all topped off with the offsetting warm/cool color balance of the water... AND the slight tension/motion provided by the wind-blown surface of the water.

Wonderful imagery.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on April 23, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Very much like the abstract quality here.  The water feels sky-like.
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Comment posted by John Williams on May 8, 2017 at 12:06 AM
Takes a minute to get grounded viewing this; that's a good thing!
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