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Fall in Vermont + Repost
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Fall in Vermont + Repost

by Craig Moreau

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 9, 20173,450 views10 comments
I found the fall color in Vermont this year to be overall very dull and/or brown, but there were patches of vibrant color to be found, like at this pond near Killington. I was happy to get this great afternoon light and interesting clouds to compliment the scene.

I look forward to any and all comments and critiques. Thanks!

5d2, 24-105L @ 24mm
1/60s @ f/11, ISO100
TK luminosity adjustments

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 9, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Craig,

A quiet and beautiful autumn image.  I like the calmness of the lake with some subtle ripples adding positive interest.  The lake is surrounded by lovely fall color and the light is beautiful as well.  There's a lot to take in, including a great cloud arrangement, but it all comes together beautifully.

I like the inclusion of the rock in the LL; my only small wish that there was a little more room on the left so it's not so cramped. But that is a very minor point.

Processing is spot on as well. Great work!

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on November 9, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Craig, this is a lovely, peaceful scene that the glowing fall colors across the lake and their reflections accent very well.  The touch of foreground grass, as well as the rocks and reeds add a fine sense of depth that does a great job of putting the viewer right there.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 9, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Pretty fall scene. Lots of elements that come together quite nicely. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on November 9, 2017 at 9:10 PM
This is a beautiful scene, Craig.  It has such a peaceful quality to it.  The arrangement of all of the different elements in your composition work very well.  Very nice work!
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on November 10, 2017 at 1:52 AM
Beautiful fall scene, Craig.  That's one thing I miss about back East.  I think I would brighten the shadows on the sedges and foreground slightly.  Very nice.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on November 10, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you all for the comments!

Lon, I agree about wanting a bit more space around that rock. The frame was a little tight to begin with, then I also had to level the horizon, so that cropped even more out of that corner. Next time I'll have to back up a little.

Gary, I think you're right. I'll take a look at the dark fg.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Lowe on November 10, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Such a beautiful shot. The clouds and their reflection are the topping on the cake. The FG to my eye looks fine in the larger version.
Registered on February 11, 2004, 777 Posts, 5252 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 10, 2017 at 6:32 PM
A very beautiful place recorded with some nice colors. The weakest is the llc which feels too dark and the rock seems crowded.  It's hard to suggest stepping back for the image because there may be even more dark plants over there. 
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on November 10, 2017 at 10:22 PM
In looking back at my files, I had a frame from about 2 minutes earlier, with the camera slightly to the left of this view, and including more foreground and more room around the lower left rock. I prefer the shaded background mountains and overall light of the original post more, but like the framing and brighter foreground of the repost better. I'm interested to hear what others say.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 10, 2017 at 10:42 PM
The composition in the repost just feels a lot more balanced. And the llc is lighter which fits the mood of the image much better IMO.  I suspect that the far shore can be adjusted to be brighter and as colorful as the original if you wanted that, although I like it as it is.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments