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Olympic Autumn + RP
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Olympic Autumn + RP

by Vance Gese

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 22, 20171,557 views12 comments
Some vine maple near an Olympic National Forest campground and trail called Fall's View.  Most of the leaves were yellow but a few were orange and red here and there.  Made this image just a few weeks ago in October.  Our autumn colors here on the Olympic Peninsula were quite nice this year, which was surprising considering how dry the wholesummer was.
4x5, 120mm, warm polarizer, Provia 100F.  Flatbed scan, Tony Kuyper's masks and such.

Larger image provided as well.

Your suggestions, comments, thoughts, etc would be very much appreciated.
Thanks, and Happy Thanksgiving.

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 22, 2017 at 8:11 PM
I like it. It's not just 'pretty' but has something to say imo. I'm sure the small plant in the lower left will be a subject of comments but I like it there. The moss covered trees in these rainforests are always an attention getter but coming up with meaningful compositions takes time. Wonderfully creative image. Good use of imagination.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on November 23, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Amazing how colorful the scene is - wouldn't have expected it.  A difficult place to compose it seems - very busy - but you've composed this really well to control the chaos.  The overall green atmosphere must be from the reflected light off the foliage.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on November 23, 2017 at 10:36 AM
You made an interesting comp of the forest chaos. Hard to do....
The diagonal branches and comps and splashes of color is very well done.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Ryan Kimball on November 23, 2017 at 12:23 PM
AT first I thought the yellow was a bit overwhelming but after looking for a bit longer I think it works. THese types of scenes are very difficult to make an interesting photo of. I think the framing of the green center tree is well placed and helps balance out the chaos of the yellows.
Registered on August 14, 2017, 11 Posts, 34 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on November 23, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Beautiful and orderly. And yet, still no book. enlightened
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on November 23, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Igor, Harry, Dan, Ryan, and Morris, thank you for your comments.  Looking at this on my wife's laptop, I seem to see something of a yellow/green cast throughout the image.  This repost is an attempt to correct that.  Hopefully, it looks better.
Thanks again for all your input.  I value every comment you folks make.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on November 24, 2017 at 1:40 AM
The repost seems to have less pop but looks more realistic. I like the way the centred tree's branches radiate out in your composition.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 24, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Vance,

Great to see an image for you.  I still love seeing (and appreciating) the works from film.  I think you've done well with the processing too.  I like the repost, but honestly not seeing too much of a difference.  As far as being yellow/green....  my first sarcastic thought was, "duh?"   angel enlightened

What you've captured and composed here fits right in with the "order from chaos" theme.  I do like the autumn colors in the background and I think have a very positive impact on this image. The yellow leaves upfront tie the image together nicely with the color in the background; leaving this fascinating tree in between.

I think to emphasize the moss covered tree, I was thinking of a crop off the left to remove the skinny tree on the left. But that's pretty minor.

Great work as always,

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 24, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Vance,

Great to see an image for you.  I still love seeing (and appreciating) the works from film.  I think you've done well with the processing too.  I like the repost, but honestly not seeing too much of a difference.  As far as being yellow/green....  my first sarcastic thought was, "duh?"   angel enlightened

What you've captured and composed here fits right in with the "order from chaos" theme.  I do like the autumn colors in the background and I think have a very positive impact on this image. The yellow leaves upfront tie the image together nicely with the color in the background; leaving this fascinating tree in between.

I think to emphasize the moss covered tree, I was thinking of a crop off the left to remove the skinny tree on the left. But that's pretty minor.

Great work as always,

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 25, 2017 at 3:49 PM
A chaotic scene, but your composition really holds it together really well! Beautiful colors and sweet image. No suggestions here. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on November 26, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Vance, Great job setting up this comp and making a fine image in a place that would be quite difficult. I think the repost looks better but there doesn't appear to be much difference. I just love all that moss. Nice work.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on November 28, 2017 at 5:59 AM
The complexity of the composition is what really draws me to this photograph. It captures the inherent beautify of the forest in an uncompromising fashion. Too many photographers choose to simplify scenes of this nature too much. I am so glad you chose to capture that very aspect that makes these places so special.

Given that this was captured on large format film, I can only image what a thrill it must be to view a large print. 

Look forward to seeing more of your work Vance.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments