Peaceful Beach REWORK

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 4, 20183,707 views10 comments

PLEASE VIEW LARGE

Thank you for your suggestions on this image. I have reworked it by lowering the contrast of the water on the right and I also tried to adjust the color of the earth's shadow. I'm not sure I was very successful in that effort.

I would appreciate any and all critiques and suggestions; they certainly help a lot.

Comments

10 comments

Comment posted by Dan Kearl on January 4, 2018 at 10:08 PM

The difference is subtle but noticeable and the repost looks great.
The color on the horizon is a bit more pronounced and lovely.
Terrific beach image....

Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments

Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on January 5, 2018 at 8:15 AM

Nice job on the re-post Bill, the changes really make the image pop.

Registered on November 29, 2017, 19 Posts, 260 Comments

Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 5, 2018 at 3:09 PM

Bill,

Simply amazing what a couple subtle changes can make. Fabulous job of taking that feedback and taking this image up another notch.

I can definitely see this one hanging in a beach house somewhere on the coast, in a big bold white frame...oh, probably about 2.5ft x 5ft would look about right. cool

Lon

Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments

Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on January 5, 2018 at 7:25 PM

This repost/rework looks great, Bill. I love the mood and the subtle color and contrast.
--P

Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments

Comment posted by Mark Seaver on January 6, 2018 at 3:20 PM

I "still"

think this is a lovely beach image, Bill. The colors all look great, from the pure white sand to the golden grasss, the turquoise water and the fine earth glow.

Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments

Comment posted by Bill Leggett on January 6, 2018 at 4:06 PM

Very nice, Bill. I once told a fellow photographer at White Sands NM that the pure white dunes reminded me of Pensacola, except without the water. Excellent panoramic view.

Registered on July 21, 2004, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments

Comment posted by Ed Lowe on January 6, 2018 at 4:36 PM

Those subtle changes have made a beautiful image even better, Bill. Nicely done.

Ed

Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments

Comment posted by Eva McDermott on January 6, 2018 at 6:23 PM

You captured some wonderful light here Bill. The soft pastel colors on the horizon are wonderful.

Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments

Comment posted by Harley Goldman on January 7, 2018 at 1:59 PM

Did not see the first, but really like this. Minor but I might clone the plants on the left edge in the shadow. I find it a minor eye magnet, but not a biggie. Very well done, Bill.

Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments

Comment posted by Silvia Richter on January 9, 2018 at 2:42 PM

A most pleasant capture of this moment to my eye, Bill. The pano format works indeed very well to convey the serenity of the scene to me. I like the rather crisp details of the sea surface complementing the textures of the dunes.

Silvia

Registered on February 27, 2011, 18 Posts, 167 Comments