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Sand Contours and REPOST
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Sand Contours and REPOST

by Dave Dillemuth

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 26, 20183,030 views11 comments
Another from Death Valley with Harley. I was attracted to this repeating horizontal ridges. Would have been nice to have some side lighting but did my best to bring out the textures and forms with local contrast adjustments. C&C appreciated.

Canon 5DSR, 70-200 f/4 IS L

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Bill Leggett on January 26, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Very nice, Dave. You got great sky against the colorful dunes, seems you handled the lighting well. I know what you mean about side lighting. I've found that Great Sand Dunes has been been a similar challenge, but I think you had enough of the light source to bring it out. If I had to nitpick, I would remove that bit of vegetation near bottom right edge. Thanks for sharing.
Registered on July 21, 2004, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on January 26, 2018 at 9:21 PM
I am enjoying the warm tones, contours and lines flowing out to the sky. Real nice take on the dunes. I would lose the dark bush toward the LLC and maybe the plants along the bottom edge. . 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 27, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Dave,

Really enjoying the golden colors here.  You've done a great job with the processing and enhancing the tones and contrasts.

The color contrast with the blue in the sky is a great inclusion - although for me it feels like the sky is just a little short.  I'm wondering if a crop off the bottom might work to allow the sky to become more relevant? (even though this is clearly about the dunes)  But it's not just a crop for that reason. I also was going to comment on the vegetation on the bottom edge and would agree with Harley on the dark plant LL.  In the end, I would rather have this as presented with a tad more sky.  If no more sky, a bit of a crop off the bottom.  YMMV.

Great color work from these DV dune images!

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on January 27, 2018 at 12:35 PM
The dunes almost look like brush strokes--a good thing. I agree about the bushes, especially the dark one. This could use a bit more sky, but I like it as presented. The color looks real nice.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on January 27, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Another real nice take on DV, Dave. I think you nicely pushed the contrast within the limits. I like the shapes and contours, and the sky makes a pleasing color contrast. Well done.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 27, 2018 at 5:47 PM
I find this to be a pleasing image. I would back off a bit on the dune saturation but that's a personal preference. 
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on January 27, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thanks for the helpful comments. This version has more sky (I had cropped down in the original) and cloned out some of the bushes in the lower left.
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on January 27, 2018 at 10:49 PM
You nailed it with the repost, Dave. The subdued lighting has brought out some beautiful undulations and color in the dunes in this scene. This has a nice combination of warm and cool colors. You and Harley really hit the mother lode on your trip. Awesome work.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 28, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Dave, I love the repost!! Fantastic work! devil Nick
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on January 28, 2018 at 9:33 PM
I definitely prefer the repost version, Dave.  The additional sky makes a big positive difference. I'm also glad you didn't remove all the bushes as well because they give a sense of scale to the image.  A very nice image.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Ry Birge on February 3, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Great composition Dave. Really love the silky lines and the muted colors of the dune. Very appealing picture. Keep up the good work
Registered on September 23, 2017, 118 Posts, 278 Comments