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Forked Wash + repost
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Forked Wash + repost

by Dave Dillemuth

Gallery: LandscapePosted March 10, 20184,208 views15 comments
Seasonal wash on the Death Valley playa. Compositionally, I would have preferred a more narrow wash including the outer banks in the foreground but it was not to be. Comments and suggestions appreciated.

5DSR, 16-35 f/4 IS L @ 16mm

Comments

15 comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on March 10, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Not too shabby :) fun!
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on March 11, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Great leading lines, color and reflection. I am not sure I am sold on the muddy looking banks, though, at least in terms of a wall hanger. You sure got some skies in DV, not a common thing. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Cameron on March 11, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Very striking fabulous shapes and lead lines with a stunning sky but I do sort of agree with Harley in respect of the unfortunate muckiness of the mud banks beside the fork it looks like a lot of other visitors have been there before you.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on March 11, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Great skies and comp.  Like the way the center mud divides the clouds at pretty much the right spot.  Nicely done.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on March 11, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Dave, I agree with the slight muddiness. Perhaps you could adjust the lighter tones in the foreground without touching the water and the reflections. The composition is real nice, and I especially like the background mountains and that great sky.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on March 11, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thanks for the input on the mud (salt flats). I went back and burned the banks down and increased the overall contrast a touch to try and direct the eye a bit more up the wash. 
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on March 11, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Repost is a real nice improvement. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on March 11, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Nicely done, Dave. I have this illusion of the central island being lower than the water, a sort of gully. It really affects the outlook on the image.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on March 11, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Much better, don't think I've seen this composition here before, the forked lead in works very well.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on March 11, 2018 at 2:23 PM
The repost is the ticket, Dave. The adjustments draw me nicely into the scene and toward the mountains and the drama in the sky. Great reflections, BTW.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on March 11, 2018 at 5:20 PM
I like how the converging lines of the wash combine with the lines in the clouds to form an X. The light and color is beautiful and compliments the scene very nicely.  Beautiful work!
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on March 11, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Dave, a really unusual scene that has a very high impact. i prefer the darker processing in the repost which makes the cloud reflections pop even more. You really had some good fortune with clouds on your DV trip, but you also came up with a creative way to take advantage of those conditions, outstanding image !!!
Registered on November 29, 2017, 19 Posts, 260 Comments
Comment posted by Ry Birge on March 12, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Love the composition. Colors and reflection are great. They come together to make a very compelling picture. Keep up the good work Dave. Ry
Registered on September 23, 2017, 118 Posts, 278 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on March 13, 2018 at 11:28 AM
The colors are great, Dave.  Your comp. works well also with that major pointer into the distance.  Very dramatic and very inviting.  I seem to be in a "brighter" mode as I find myself lightening many of my images in processing and preferring your original post here.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on March 15, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful work Dave! Both images work great for me but I might slightly lean towards the repost. You really did a nice job with this scene.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments