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Marsh Magic  Edit X 2
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Marsh Magic Edit X 2

by Harry Lichtman

Gallery: LandscapePosted March 20, 20184,657 views22 comments
This was taken a little later than a similar previous POST The sky was better defined in the previous, but the reflected light in the frozen marsh was better from this angle, and the light warmer.  Not sure if one is better than the other, just different. I cropped a hot spot off the right that may have been more problematic in the previous.  The cloud halo above the tree was better positioned in the previous I think, but as the clouds moved and I changed position just didn't line up as well for this one.

D810, 16-35mm, f16.  Single RAW processed x 2 for Dynamic Range

Comments

22 comments
Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on March 20, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Harry, what a spectacular image. The light and color here are wonderful, and you were fortunate to have the radial pattern in the clouds.I like your choice of a cooler white balance here, it adds some drama to this twilight image. Your processing of the light and color here is great. From a composition perspective, I like your arrangement of the snow covered rushes in the foreground, and I like the diagonal flow of the channel towards the trees. I think a slight crop from the top would add a little more emphasis on the trees, without losing anything of importance in the radial clouds. Initially, in viewing the smaller image I thought the comp was a little too heavily weighted to the right side of the scene. But upon viewing the larger version, the detail in the rushes in the LLC appears strong enough to serve as a balancing element. I'd consider dodging the the rushes in the LLC, this would draw you eye even more to them, and strengthen their role as a balancing element. But that is a nitpick, this is a very high impact image as presented.
Registered on November 29, 2017, 19 Posts, 260 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on March 20, 2018 at 10:35 AM
This is lovely, Harry.  The flow of clouds contrasts beautifully with the cold, sharp textures in the snowy marsh.  While the clouds don't line up "perfectly" with the tall trees, there's a fine eye flow from the water to the trees to the clouds.  I prefer the sense of flow and the extra emphasis on the water in the marsh in this view.
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on March 20, 2018 at 11:01 AM
This is a real beauty, Harry! Great depth, foreground detail and killer sky. No suggestions here, a most enjoyable image. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Reno DiTullio on March 20, 2018 at 12:51 PM
It's a beauty, Harry.  Love everything about it, comp, depth, color, processing...!
Registered on November 14, 2003, 130 Posts, 1644 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on March 20, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Both versions are superb, but my preference is for this one, Harry. I think the reeds add so much to this scene and the warm light is slightly more prominent throughout the image and the clouds fanning out above the trees is spectacular. My only suggestion; and this is just a personal preference; would be to doge the reeds toward the LLC ever so slightly as to make them stand out a little more. You can not go wrong with either one.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on March 20, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Fabulous, Harry! I think this is one of your best. Wow! devil
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Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by David Schoen on March 20, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Beautiful and believable color.  Not oversaturated.  The cool tones on the snow add to the atmosphere.  This would make a wonderful large print.
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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on March 20, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for the observations and comments.  I've brightened the left corner a little as suggested and added some general contrast and slightly brightened the cloud areas of the sky to better define them.  Wondering if that was an improvement, or no real difference.
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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on March 20, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Whoops, forgot the image.
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Comment posted by Ian Cameron on March 20, 2018 at 6:35 PM
This is a cracker Harry gorgeous believable colours a superb balance of warm and cool and I think those clouds are fabulous as is the quality of the reflected light in the pool.  A very strong image and in my opinion better by a significant margin than the other versions you showed before.
Registered on August 6, 2004, 1125 Posts, 3318 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on March 20, 2018 at 9:22 PM
You nailed it with the repost, Harry.

Ed
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Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on March 21, 2018 at 3:46 AM
The repost works really well for me, Harry. Especially brightening the area of the clouds. Nicely done.
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on March 21, 2018 at 7:09 AM
The changes in the repost takes this shot from great to outstanding. Nice work Harry.
Registered on November 29, 2017, 19 Posts, 260 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on March 21, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Nicely composed and exquisite light, soft and subtle colors. I like the angular foreground weeds and the wonderful clouds. Just gorgeous.
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Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on March 21, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Harry, the radiating cloudlines and also reflection of the orange sky off the ice are nice.  I think some more of that orange reflecting off the snow would be nice and wonder if desaturating the blues a little might achieve that.  The angling of the pond works well.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on March 21, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Thanks Doug - I selected the highlights of the snow only and reduced the cyans/increased the reds slightly.  I think an improvement, just didn't want to go overboard in that direction so hopefully the adjustment appears restrained.  Good idea.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on March 24, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Harry, I'm really enjoying this image. It is a great composition and the conditions you captured are wonderful. Those clouds are very nice and I just love the light and reflections. This has such a nice feel to me. I think the last repost is just about as perfect as one could want. Beautiful work. One of those images that would look great large and on metal. cool

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Shirley Freeman on March 24, 2018 at 2:51 PM
What a gorgeous image, Harry!  Love the lighting, and everything else about this scene. 
Registered on May 27, 2017, 77 Posts, 844 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on March 24, 2018 at 9:37 PM
Beyond the beautiful color and the warm / cool tonal contrast, this is an interesting study in compositional lines.  The converging lines in the sky are very ordered and the v-shape of the frozen stream echoes this shape.  The frozen vegetation in the foreground forms chaotic lines that contrast with the otherwise ordered structure (not in a bad way though).  Nicely done!
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Comment posted by Rick Turner on March 29, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Like everything Harry with this capture.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on March 30, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Wonderful mix of warm and cool tone Harry.  I like your composition as well as the radiating colors.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by John Williams on April 1, 2018 at 8:13 PM
I prefer this one Harry. I like the foreground here, it leads my eye though the scene a little better, and this one has a broader feel to it. Lovely colors, and those clouds are fascinating.

That had to be a chilly morning!
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