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Snowy flying the coop
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Snowy flying the coop

by Ry Birge

Gallery: AvianPosted April 12, 2018642 views2 comments
I took this picture was snowy egret taking off from the nest early one morning to forage for food. It's mate stayed behind accompanied by a great egret. All feedback is greatly appreciated. Ry
I have reposted with Dennis's commentary in mind
 
CAMERA Canon EOS 7D Mark II
LENS 100-400mm f/5.7-40
ISO 320
FOCAL LENGTH 400.0 mm (631.0 mm in 35mm)
APERTURE f/9
EXPOSURE TIME 0.0005s (1/2000)
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2 comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 12, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Nice dof to maintain both Snowies in good focus, Ry.  I like the individual elements in this image, but the combination creates a composition that feels awkward to me.  The dangling legs and down swept wings of the bird taking off put a brake on the way my eye wants to move based on the relative positions of the birds.  It's not something you can control except by taking a ton of images and hoping they do what you want.  That's always one of the big challenges in wildlife photography and the difficulty goes up exponentially as you put more subjects in the frame.
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Comment posted by Ry Birge on April 13, 2018 at 9:08 AM
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