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Simplicity

by Michael Anderson

Gallery: LandscapePosted April 6, 20072,915 views39 comments
This is one from Crested Butte last fall. I like the simplicity of lines and the warm soft light behind the aspens, but am not sure of the strength of the composition. It's simple and graphic but does it hold your attention?

Thanks for any opinions you may have.

-Mike

Comments

39 comments
Comment posted by Doug Dolde on April 6, 2007 at 12:23 AM
Yes indeed. This fantastic man. The foreground trees with the yellow background are wonderful. Could be one of the best aspen shots I have seen,
Registered on November 1, 2003, 305 Posts, 3900 Comments
Comment posted by Pete Bengeyfield on April 6, 2007 at 12:27 AM
I like the comp. The separation on the trees is good, and the BG colors show up well. Nice shot.
Registered on December 2, 2003, 1247 Posts, 3439 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Hudon on April 6, 2007 at 12:27 AM
How about a horizontal crop out of the lower top half? The yellow above and the green below make a nice graphic in that case.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 315 Posts, 2246 Comments
Comment posted by Vinu Lakkur on April 6, 2007 at 12:29 AM
yeah this is a beautiful image Mike. I can see how the bottom part of the image adds, but I almost wonder whether cropping that foreground plant would make a pleasing image as well (?)
Registered on October 11, 2006, 9 Posts, 24 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Anderson on April 6, 2007 at 12:36 AM
Thanks for the critique you guys. My original shots of this scene were exactly as you describe with a horizontal version of the upper half of the image, but the background light was pretty harsh except for the last 30-60 seconds of the sunset when I switched to a vertical. The earlier horizontals are too contrasty and those images don't have the appeal of this one. The light was a bit tricky and I bracketed a bunch but by the time I recomposed back to a horizontal format the soft light was gone. A snowstorm moved in the next day and changed the scene for good. I may go back this year and re-shoot a horizontal at the same time of day.
Registered on January 31, 2006, 228 Posts, 3072 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on April 6, 2007 at 12:59 AM
Amazing! I agree with Doug, this is one of the finest Aspen images I've ever witnessed. Absolutely beautiful Mike. Well done. You have a great understanding of light.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Kent Mearig on April 6, 2007 at 1:14 AM
The only thing bothering me is the apparent counter clockwise tilt. The colors in the background are outstanding, and I think it works best with the lower portions included.
Registered on September 4, 2006, 237 Posts, 4748 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Crabbe on April 6, 2007 at 1:55 AM
Mike:
I think a square crop down from the top is just awesome, easily among the best I can recall. My concerns with the lower 1/3 is that I'm just not getting any "new" or "Important" information regarding the 'story' of your photo. Plus I also think the little shrub is more of a distracting eye-catcher than and point of interest.

But again, to reinforce, that top area is the Bomb! Opps, how un-PC. I meant, it's totally Killer! Doh! More violent connotations. Let's say it's Hot. No, Cool. Scratch that. Rad. :cool:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 182 Posts, 1840 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on April 6, 2007 at 5:26 AM
This is beautiful Mike, It has such a warm feel to it, makes me wish I was there. I have been looking at this for a while now,definitely holds my attention.
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on April 6, 2007 at 5:31 AM
Wow, what an awesome aspen image this is. That's why we all should not get cynic about a certain kind of subject matter, because that would mean eventually that such images like this one would not be made in the future. One of the best aspen-shot's I have seen. There might be images out there with better arrangement of the trunks themselves (though this here is still really great), but this coloured backdrop is what makes this a killer image. Does it hold my attention? Oh yes, I can look at this forever...
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Guy Tal on April 6, 2007 at 8:46 AM
To me wandering through an aspen grove is one of the quintessential experiences of the western mountains and I'm always inspired by good images of these environments. The backdrop of glowing conifers not only sets off the boles, but also conveys the steep relief of the terrain.
Compositionally I think this is very good, although I am partial to a square crop of just the top part. The little branches on the lower right corner are about the only think I may consider somewhat distracting though not in a significant way.

Guy
Registered on November 1, 2003, 566 Posts, 15507 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Handley on April 6, 2007 at 8:54 AM
It holds my attention in a wonderful way. this is a wonderful image. I love the soft highlights on the aspen boles, and what a great background. A very effective image.

Michael
Registered on April 1, 2004, 38 Posts, 1301 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Schroeder on April 6, 2007 at 9:02 AM
I just love trees so much Mike. The bareness of aspens always fascinates me. This is a beautiful 'portrait' of these fine trees.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 147 Posts, 518 Comments
Comment posted by Thomas Creel on April 6, 2007 at 9:07 AM
I love it as is compositionally. The only thing I can think of that might improve it is if the foreground trees were lightened up just a bit so that they "pop" out a bit more.

The background of the lit trees really sets this one apart.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 104 Posts, 852 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on April 6, 2007 at 9:46 AM
This is just stunning. I think I like this better than your Tibet images. It is a quintessential Aspen shot. I like the square crop and I like it as it is.

- Dan.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on April 6, 2007 at 9:49 AM
This is really beautiful. I agree about cropping the bottom to eliminate the branches/leaves in the LRC. I also think a horizontal image using the top 1/3 would make be great as well. Either way, this is excellent.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Weaver on April 6, 2007 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful image Mike. The light is sublime. I also might tend toward cropping off the bottom.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 226 Posts, 623 Comments
Comment posted by Mike Horn on April 6, 2007 at 12:01 PM
This is very beautiful Mike, those yellows/greens in the background, are a perfect backdrop to the amazing detail in the Aspens up front. I can see the crop everyone is talking about, but more the small section of leaves at the bottom sticking up. but man this is just beatiful. I like alot as is!
Registered on March 6, 2006, 82 Posts, 918 Comments
Comment posted by John Zinn on April 6, 2007 at 12:15 PM
Mike, I really like the upper half and would crop from the bottom. I appreciate the "looking through the trees perspective" and the warm glow of light on those pines really transforms their appearance!! My only disconcerting element of the shot is the larger aspen trunk toward the right. It seems a bit "in your face" and keeps grabbing my attention.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 41 Posts, 1743 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on April 6, 2007 at 12:22 PM
I like it full frame, Mike. Those branches at the LRC really help add depth IMO. And this is one of the very, very best Aspen images I've ever seen. Absolutely stunning! :toast: :toast:
There is nothing I would change, no crop that would improve it IMO, nothing I would have done differently, and I like it as a whole down to the finest detail - and you know I rarely say that about an image up for critique. In short, I want a print :smile:
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on April 6, 2007 at 12:26 PM
She is a beaut and I would concur with some of the comments above, I am partial to a square crop of the upper section of this one. Mighty fine as presented, though.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on April 6, 2007 at 12:48 PM
WOW, this one is a painting, Mike. Very well named, captured, and processed. :smile:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Bernie Kasper on April 6, 2007 at 8:37 PM
This is sic Mike, in a good way :biggrin: Wonderful image the color is crazy in this. :toast:
Registered on June 5, 2005, 251 Posts, 3734 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Helms on April 6, 2007 at 8:53 PM
Michael, this is easily one of the best aspen images I've ever viewed. This is a stunner and I wouldn't change a thing.
:toast:

Thanks for sharing
Registered on November 28, 2003, 37 Posts, 1005 Comments
Comment posted by Mike Veltri on April 6, 2007 at 8:54 PM
Sure holds my attention! Beautiful color and detail.
Registered on February 3, 2007, 51 Posts, 1077 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on April 7, 2007 at 11:18 AM
Wow! I just keep coming back to look at this one!
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Tomas Kaspar on April 7, 2007 at 11:59 AM
Mike I think that crop from the bottom to square would improve this. There seems to be a little bit too much of magneta , but I'm not on good monitor so maybe this screen. Good eye.
Registered on December 26, 2005, 158 Posts, 736 Comments
Comment posted by Mike Moats on April 7, 2007 at 4:40 PM
Hey Mike, This is really nice. Great 3D look. :toast:
Registered on October 20, 2004, 892 Posts, 6324 Comments
Comment posted by David Senesac on April 7, 2007 at 4:48 PM
Very creative idea for a closeup of aspen trunks. The narrow shape of confifers in the background goes very well with the general vertical geomtries of trees. Quite pleasant visual effect. Not something that every occurred to me but now you've planted something in my own awareness I may take a look at some topo maps this fall to see where topography might offer something. ...David
Registered on April 24, 2006, 167 Posts, 869 Comments
Comment posted by David Chauvin on April 7, 2007 at 7:07 PM
Wow! The depth of this image is striking. My only minor nit is the group of leaves in the lower right.
Registered on August 5, 2004, 1007 Posts, 5595 Comments
Comment posted by Jack Brauer on April 7, 2007 at 7:48 PM
Hey Mike,
You continue to impress! What a great use of light and color.
Registered on September 12, 2005, 40 Posts, 627 Comments
Comment posted by Carl Donohue on April 8, 2007 at 3:09 PM
Hey Mike

I just saw this now. It's superb. I tried the various crops I saw listed, and as is is close to perfect. Ridiculously wonderful image.

Cheers

Carl
Registered on November 1, 2003, 46 Posts, 589 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on April 8, 2007 at 10:52 PM
I'm with Marc on this one. This is about as aestheticly perfect as you can get I think.

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on April 9, 2007 at 3:31 AM
Mike,

I could have swore I already commented - I know I've looked at this enough times!
This is so beautiful, it's almost unreal. Another one of the few images that has the look of a painting. Dan used the word stunning, and I agree. The apparent tilt of the pines in the background don't bother me because the dominance of the aspens up front are so compelling.

The only nit for me to complete this outstanding presentation, would be the exclusion of the small bunch of leaves at the bottom. Otherwise, does it hold my attention? Over and over and over.....

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Benner on April 9, 2007 at 8:18 AM
Beautiful understated image. Congratulations.
Registered on December 8, 2003, 482 Posts, 1868 Comments
Comment posted by Verena & Georg Pop on April 9, 2007 at 9:01 AM
Hi Michael,
extraordinary beautiful picture!!! (but not soo simple at all, imo) And that from such an often photographed subject! Most, of course, is already said.
Did anybody mention already, that those trees seem to have sad, sleepy eyes, just like those often painted in childrens books, when trees are illustrated with a a face?
What a nice sight after first looking back into ESS after a few months of absence!
Georg
Registered on July 5, 2006, 272 Posts, 2823 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Anderson on April 11, 2007 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for all of the commentary and critiques everyone! I really appreciate the input. I'm conflicted about the bushy leaves in the lower right. I'll sleep on that one. As for the square crop, I personally prefer the long vertical version, but will go back to this spot this September and reshoot at the same time of day a horizontal image. Thanks again for all of the input!

-Mike
Registered on January 31, 2006, 228 Posts, 3072 Comments
Comment posted by Carol Hyman on April 21, 2007 at 6:14 PM
Mike, I guess I'm a composition "freak," because I took many art lessons beginning at about age 8 through college. Here's my 2-cents (just what it's worth ;^) Please eliminate those branches and turn this guy into a square format. It would be stunning. The leaning gold trees in the BG are a perfect foil for the FG Aspen trunks.

Nice work.

Carol
Registered on January 18, 2007, 597 Posts, 8062 Comments
Comment posted by Carsten Ranke on June 2, 2007 at 12:17 PM
Really outstanding, agree with others that this one of the best aspen shots ever shown on the net, for sure. Thanks for your description how you made this photo - good to learn that sometimes seconds make the shot. Light and colors are just perfect, almost unearthly. I would not change a thing. Hats off !
Registered on May 31, 2007, 20 Posts, 411 Comments