Simplicity
by Michael Anderson
This is one from Crested Butte last fall. I like the simplicity of lines and the warm soft light behind the aspens, but am not sure of the strength of the composition. It's simple and graphic but does it hold your attention?
Thanks for any opinions you may have.
-Mike
Comments
39 commentsI think a square crop down from the top is just awesome, easily among the best I can recall. My concerns with the lower 1/3 is that I'm just not getting any "new" or "Important" information regarding the 'story' of your photo. Plus I also think the little shrub is more of a distracting eye-catcher than and point of interest.
But again, to reinforce, that top area is the Bomb! Opps, how un-PC. I meant, it's totally Killer! Doh! More violent connotations. Let's say it's Hot. No, Cool. Scratch that. Rad.
Compositionally I think this is very good, although I am partial to a square crop of just the top part. The little branches on the lower right corner are about the only think I may consider somewhat distracting though not in a significant way.
Guy
Michael
The background of the lit trees really sets this one apart.
- Dan.
There is nothing I would change, no crop that would improve it IMO, nothing I would have done differently, and I like it as a whole down to the finest detail - and you know I rarely say that about an image up for critique. In short, I want a print
Thanks for sharing
You continue to impress! What a great use of light and color.
I just saw this now. It's superb. I tried the various crops I saw listed, and as is is close to perfect. Ridiculously wonderful image.
Cheers
Carl
Chris
I could have swore I already commented - I know I've looked at this enough times!
This is so beautiful, it's almost unreal. Another one of the few images that has the look of a painting. Dan used the word stunning, and I agree. The apparent tilt of the pines in the background don't bother me because the dominance of the aspens up front are so compelling.
The only nit for me to complete this outstanding presentation, would be the exclusion of the small bunch of leaves at the bottom. Otherwise, does it hold my attention? Over and over and over.....
Lon
extraordinary beautiful picture!!! (but not soo simple at all, imo) And that from such an often photographed subject! Most, of course, is already said.
Did anybody mention already, that those trees seem to have sad, sleepy eyes, just like those often painted in childrens books, when trees are illustrated with a a face?
What a nice sight after first looking back into ESS after a few months of absence!
Georg
-Mike
Nice work.
Carol