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Autumn Stage
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Autumn Stage

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 11, 2011475 views26 comments
Ok, I know we're dead in the middle of winter, but I still have yet another image to share from early November in Yosemite. And since I don't yet have my film back from the visit to Yosemite last week with Chris, I'll just have to show this one.

I've posted a companion picture in the NPN Photographers gallery where my friend Kyle Krause caught me in the act of using that archaic camera that uses film. That picture shows me capturing this image; or at least one of them as this a blend of two different exposures for water treatment and exposure.

As always, your honest thoughts and critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

4x5, Fujinon 135mm, V100, f/22 @1/2s & lots of TK magic.

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

26 comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on January 11, 2011 at 5:19 AM
Holy cow, this is amazing! You really did a nice job processing this, pulling every nuance of color and detail out of it. I have one from a little way to the left that I like quite a bit, but it pales compared to this. Excellent! I can't get over the dedtail in all the background foliage. Also, that little warm spot of clarity in the river, awesome!

Thanks for the comments on the foggy tree shot, I think :wink:

You can't get upset with me for beating you out of the gate with that one, cause' your's is probably better than mine! :razz:

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 11, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Wow, this is beautiful, with amazing detail. The composition is perfect to my eye. I like the stream in the foreground with the rocks alot. The bit of color from the under water rocks in the center is a nice extra touch. All that color going back through the woods is wonderful. Really nice Lon.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on January 11, 2011 at 8:17 AM
Very pretty Lon. I like the way the 2 large trees are composed, and certainly like the inclusion of the stream. As nice as the colors are, my main attraction is the stream - I wish we had streams like this in Florida!!
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Raymond D Smith on January 11, 2011 at 8:48 AM
The detail is superb as always Lon. Did your wife see any blurry leaves in this one. :biggrin: The light is real nice on the trees but I think the yellows/leaves could be bumped up just a touch. The rust coloured rocks are a sweet addition too, especially in the large photo. Another excellent photo and it was nice putting a face with the name too. I also found it interesting that there is a bridge behind you, i would never had guessed. I find it very interesting those types of photo's( it's funny what we don't show in our photo's) Cheers
Registered on January 22, 2009, 12 Posts, 479 Comments
Comment posted by Barry Vangrov on January 11, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Classic composition, should make a gorgeous print. The big rock seems to anchor the whole image. Based on my monitor I could see a adding bit more yellow saturation but can't nitpick that. Is that a hint of blue cast on the whitewater or just my monitor?
Registered on September 1, 2009, 148 Posts, 749 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on January 11, 2011 at 10:17 AM
This is excellent, Lon. The 135 lens placed everything very nicely in the overall scene. The water comes across especially nice here. The two main tress also work perfectly in the spacing and providing symmetry to the view as well. Another wonderful capture from this area of the park..... :cool:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on January 11, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Very pleasing and relaxing scene. Beautiful color and comp.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on January 11, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Excellent work Lon. I think everything works well here. I generally agree with Barry's comments/suggestions as well. Happy New Years, Michael
Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Maile on January 11, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Great photos Lon, both of them!! This one is eye-poppingly sharp and pleasing. :toast:
Registered on March 2, 2009, 984 Posts, 2518 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on January 11, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Lon, I appreciate the composition with counterpointing flowing motion, horizontal lines, cold and dark colors in the foreground to the background with steady trees, vertical lines and warming shades. At least on my monitor, enhancing yellow could be advantageous.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Jorne de Bruin on January 11, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Lovely autumn scene Lon! The details are wonderfull, especially on the larger version!
Registered on June 26, 2008, 178 Posts, 2136 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on January 11, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Lon: Beautiful scene superbly rendered. Just the right amount of water and SS for my tastes. Makes me want to be there. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on January 11, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Lon, I really like it. Your composition works very effectively, giving us a lot of detail in the trees, and lovely water movement. Very good job!
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on January 11, 2011 at 2:42 PM
You have quite a few images of this kind and I think this one stands out in particular. Not sure why, maybe because of the complex composition in the bg that actually is not so complex: It is vertically mirrored in a way - a pair of trunks on each side, a thicker and a thinner one. In the centre there's one "branchy" tree to mark the mirror plane. And really like the rich warm color in the foliage. Water looks great too. Good stuff here Lon!
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Pelton on January 11, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Lon, I find this just as lovely and effective as Happy place. The whitewater flow adds a lot to the image IMO.
Registered on November 25, 2003, 380 Posts, 4647 Comments
Comment posted by Kyle L. Krause on January 11, 2011 at 8:19 PM
The detail, color and your processing are fantastic Lon. We defiitely had a great time in Yosemite with fall colors this year. Beautiful work!! How about Next month?
I'm glad you liked the images of you at work.
Registered on June 15, 2010, 29 Posts, 605 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on January 11, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Fantastic detail and color in this one Lon. I like the idea of blending exposures here, I jst might have to try this next year.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on January 11, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Nice image, Lon. Beautiful detail and color.

Is this really a blend of two 4x5 scans? I've tried that and since the trannies weren't glass mounted, I couldn't line up the images end to end. Just a slight buckle would throw them out.

Good work.

- Dan.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on January 11, 2011 at 10:17 PM
Incredible, Lon. The palette of color is gorgeous. The warm tones in that still area of the river really tie the water and forest together nicely. Wonderful detail and composition. Your blending technique worked so very well. Superb, stunning work.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on January 11, 2011 at 10:25 PM
Nice, I really like the balance of texture in the frame as well as the balance of light. The water is very expressive texture-wise, and as such complements the foliage portion of the scene. This seems a tad dark on my monitor, but I am a few months since my last calibration.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Vlad Sadovsky on January 12, 2011 at 12:38 AM
Like the ocmposition with the big rock starting the lines of other rocks and tree trunks. Water textures are excellent addition to the image. At my monitor it benefits from brightening (same as Tony's comment, but my monitor is 2 days after calibration :) ).
Registered on November 12, 2010, 48 Posts, 358 Comments
Comment posted by Gary McGhee on January 12, 2011 at 3:15 PM
This definately works for me Lon, I like the horizontal flow from the river competing with the verticle trunks and woodland for attention. Great stuff.

Gary.
Registered on April 15, 2010, 142 Posts, 2416 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Marcellini on January 12, 2011 at 5:58 PM
Very nice Lon! Personal and it may be my monitor, but I wouldn't mind it a touch brighter, at least in the mid-tones.
Registered on November 27, 2007, 250 Posts, 2468 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 12, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Thanks everyone for your comments and suggestions. I agree about brightening/boosting the yellows and perhaps a little brighter in general. And I can take out a little more blue in the water. Changes would be slight so I decided not to rework this until or if this ever gets printed.

Raymond, the bridge is only behind me in the photo Kyle shot. It's not behind the camera - in other words the bridge and image are 90deg from each other.

Dan, yes it's a blend of 2 4x5 sheets of film. Actually, more accurately it would be a composite. You're right, 2 different scanned sheets of film rarely will line up across the entire image. I just tried to align it the best I could around the rocky shoreline. Then just masked the top or bottom half (can't remember now) to allow the water exposure and SS to be combined with the exposure of the trees from two different slides. I had made that determination at the time which is why I shot two sheets. But in general, it's most often nearly impossible to blend two or more sheets of film in the sense that an hdr process would do it automatically, simply because the pixels don't line up scan to scan.

Anyway..... Thanks again!

Lon

Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on January 13, 2011 at 6:41 PM
A very lovely and expressive photograph. The composition is exquisite and I am enjoying the fantastic detail that has been portrayed here.

Your work from Yosemite is truly a joy to view.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on January 13, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Yeah, there's some "peace like a river" going on with this one. So serene and calming. :toast:
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments