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by Phil Pogledich

Gallery: LandscapePosted March 18, 20111,095 views15 comments
Some nice light about 15-20 minutes after sunset along the Pacific coast, just a bit north of the Golden Gate Bridge. I'm not entirely sure this shot works and have a few issues with it, but I can't find a good reason to take it out of the "keeper" category. Please fire away and share your thoughts, good or bad.

Canon 5DII, 17-40L at 40mm for 120 seconds at f/16 (ISO 100).

Comments

15 comments
Comment posted by Robert Dayton on March 18, 2011 at 8:14 PM
This works for me, Phil and looks like a keeper to me. The
slow shutter speed works well on the FG water, giving it a
dreamy effect. I also like the FG rock formations that offer
a contrast in their shapes to those in the background. The
colors work well also.
Registered on November 11, 2008, 281 Posts, 3958 Comments
Comment posted by Jason Risinger on March 18, 2011 at 8:17 PM
Not sure why you feel ambivalent about it, I think it's great. Funny how that works though, even with one's own images there is a lot of personal taste involved in what speaks to you. This could be seen as a bit left-heavy and bottom-heavy, but it doesn't bother me much. The cloud patterns in the sky really cap off the image well and it would be a shame to lose that softness, but maybe if you strengthened the contrast of the sky just a *tiny* bit, that element would help counteract the slight bottom-heaviness.
Registered on July 13, 2010, 13 Posts, 91 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on March 18, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Yep, a keeper to me. I like the layering in your comp and the colors are beautiful. This might show a little better with a black background. It might bring the sky out even more. I do like the amount of detail in the foreground rocks here, though, so I don't know if it would present better that way or not.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on March 18, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Works for me too. I'm really enjoying the after sunset colors. I also really like how the water looks around all the rocks from the long exposure. I'd sure keep it :smile: .

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Bruce King on March 18, 2011 at 9:43 PM
I like this one a lot Phil. As far as it being left heavy I think the brighter colors on the right help balance it out and it's not an issue to me. The light and the smokey water on the fg rocks make this one a keeper IMO. Nicely done.
Registered on January 14, 2010, 276 Posts, 2212 Comments
Comment posted by Abdullaziz Bin Ali on March 18, 2011 at 11:31 PM
The shutter speed is amazing here, love the composition as well as the exposure
as if i'm looking to a dream
Well Done :wink:
Registered on May 31, 2009, 112 Posts, 1590 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on March 18, 2011 at 11:54 PM
To me, this is really outstanding. The water motion amongst those fascinating rocks is superb, with wonderful detail and color. Then add in the distant rocks and the golden sky and you have a superb image. I'd be very pleased to have something like this in my 'keeper' file. There is plenty of interest to draw the eye from the beautiful foreground, back to the distant rocks and horizon.
As an aside, scroll cropping the top portion of the sky to eliminate the blue does put greater emphasis on the foreground if you feel that there is some pull away from the foreground. Regardless, a fantastic image.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Andrius Pašukonis on March 19, 2011 at 5:22 AM
I don't see any reason why you would consider it taking out of "keeper" category :smile: . Nice colors and composition. I like it a lot.
Registered on July 23, 2005, 111 Posts, 408 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Powers on March 19, 2011 at 10:02 AM
WOW !!! It is a keeper for me too!
Registered on July 25, 2010, 30 Posts, 72 Comments
Comment posted by Serban Simboteleca on March 19, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Keeper! :smile:
Although the left side weights more, it doesn't break, it's a good composition. I think the same as Jason, you could strengthen the contrast of the sky.
Registered on March 17, 2011, 8 Posts, 67 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on March 19, 2011 at 1:26 PM
I love the dark, dramatic, brooding nature of this shot. Definitely a keeper, although I might consider a crop of the right side. :toast:
Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments
Comment posted by Jason Kim on March 19, 2011 at 7:51 PM
I think this works really well, Phil. The misty water and deep colors are very nice. I like that you kept everything very dark, with just a hint of detail in the FG.
Registered on July 1, 2006, 60 Posts, 1233 Comments
Comment posted by David Edwards on March 20, 2011 at 4:28 AM
A beautiful shot, Phil. I love the saturated 'film' look. I personally prefer darker tones and it's great to see you haven't tried to juice every last detail out of the shadows, which would ruin it's mood and power. A very nice comp and style. Definitely a keeper imho!
:toast:
Registered on December 6, 2008, 142 Posts, 2623 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on March 20, 2011 at 12:12 PM
I think it's a keeper! Maybe just a hair contrasty in the foreground blacks but maybe not. Love the primordial soup look the long exposure has created.

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on March 21, 2011 at 4:15 AM
Definite keeper Phil;
I like this a lot with the mist like water and the warm tone in the horizon.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments