fog over Genesee river
by Gerald Liddelow
Hi all,I am a new member and this my first post.On a photo tour to Letchworth state park NY,I shot this among many other sunrise shots overlooking the Genesee river.My question is.Are the branches on the right distracting or are they good framing?
All comments are welcome.
Nikon D7000
18-55mm @ 18mm
10sec@f22
Comments
14 commentsMichael
Welcome to NPN and the Landscape/ESS Gallery! Great to have you hear. And a wonderful first post. I really like the misty atmosphere and the light/color is beautiful. The branches all around work very well to frame this quite nicely. I can see Vance's suggestion about the branches to the right of the stump, but they don't bother me too much. Actually what distracts me more is the space on the left between the edge and the tree trunk. My little rule of thumb is either include something along the edge with purpose, or exclude it. I think that space fits that. However, cropping the left edge would left a slanted left edge because of the tree and I'm not sure that would be any better. But it's a minor issue for me regardless.
Otherwise, this is quite peaceful and enjoyable. This is a great image for a book or magazine cover!
Welcome aboard. We look forward to your images and contributions to NPN.
Lon
A very nice first post! The background is amazing! Great light and atmosphere. I think the framing could work in theory, the problem here is that there are too many distractions--the break on the left side, and the leaves on the lower right. If you want a 'frame', it should look like a frame usually (in other words you wouldnt buy a painting with a crooked or broken frame!). Personally, I could even do without the foreground tree stump--it's a competing element for me. IMO, when you have an extremely strong subject as you do here in the background, there's no reason to get fancy or try to 'enhance' it with other details--simpler is almost always better. The background here is incredible, and it can easily 'speak for itself'.
Look forward to more from you!
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
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Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI