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Survival

by Patricia Brundage

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 20, 2012234 views5 comments
The small yellow flowers are a testament to survival among the sculpture of the hot springs at Mammouth Hot Springs in Yellowstone. I was drawn to the rock formations and pleasantly surprised by the touch of yellow thriving in this environment. Taken with Canon 7D, using 100-400 IS lens.

Comments welcomed.

Comments

5 comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on August 20, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Interesting formations for sure, but with the flowers playing such a small part in the image I'm not sure that your intended message is coming across. I don't really have any constructive remarks other than to perhaps zoom in closer (if that were possible).
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Julian Barkway on August 20, 2012 at 2:28 PM
I'm not so sure I agree with Bill. You need to show a fair bit of barren rock to emphasise the adverse conditions in which the flowers are flourishing and the dab of yellow offsets the bare stone perfectly. The central placement of the blooms is a bit of an issue, though. I'm not going to say you shouldn't place things in the centre but here, where the eye is naturally drawn to this little splash of colour, putting the flowers bang in the middle is rather like underlining your point in heavy marker and covering it in yellow highlighter for good measure. I don't think you should be too slavish about 'rule of thirds' or anything like that but a little bit of offset would work wonders here, imo.
Registered on January 18, 2007, 344 Posts, 1961 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 20, 2012 at 2:57 PM
The rocks are actually more fascinating to me than the flowers. What a unique combination of textures. Could maybe see burning down the bright rocks at the bottom a bit more.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Patricia Brundage on August 20, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Thanks for the suggestions. I have played around with the cropping suggestions to no avail. If I put the flowers off center I lose the rock formation on the right which to me is an important component of the scene. If I use photoshop I can place the flowers on the barren stems and remove them from the left to accomplish an off-center presentation, but didn't consider that for this submission because it is "natural" the way it stands. Probably will do that before printing. I have burned the foreground light areas to reduce their brightness and that definitely improves the lighting.
Registered on March 23, 2006, 1111 Posts, 6531 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on August 21, 2012 at 5:10 AM
I like the idea and composition but find the colours and contrast too flat. You could make more of the contrast between yellow flowers and blue sky.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments