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Jim Lockhart
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Jim Lockhart

by Jim Lockhart

Gallery: NPN PhotographersPosted February 19, 2013178 views4 comments
Taken 2/11 at the J. N. "Ding" Darling National Wildlife Refuge on Sanibel Island, Fort Myers, FL. A great place for viewing wildlife, especially birds.
I have been taking snapshots all my life, but have become more serious about photography and plan to upgrade my Canon SX30 soon. Took an online course with Sean Arbabi last Fall and loved it...still absorbing everything he taught us.
I like shooting landscapes, both grand and intimate. Also birds and whatever else I find while hiking and paddling in my home state of CT. Macro photography has always been a life long interest too.
Happy to be a member here and hope to learn and contribute as much as possible.

Comments

4 comments
Comment posted by John Neukirch on February 20, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Welcome to the group Jim. Looking forward to seeing your images from that target rich environment call Florida. :toast:
Registered on July 9, 2012, 207 Posts, 1476 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on February 20, 2013 at 7:24 PM
I like the lines and diagonals in this. You have the angular line of the rail against the diagonal of the subject's arms with hands resting on it that is echoed by the angularity of the fingers of the hands.

Then we have the lines doing their thing over in the lower left. All of that contrasted with the fractal leaf structure of the trees and the edges of the water and so on.

I also like this presentation with the rail rising from left to right rather than the imagined horizontal flip.

Color-wise, I like the blue shades in the shirt against the blues in the sky and the white pants suggesting, perhaps, missing clouds; what might have been....

I have a few nits to record, however, which I think prevents this image from achieving another level of success. First, and foremost, there is a rather obvious deviation from horizontality if one looks at the spindles of the deck on the rightmost edge of the image. Clearly a perspective crop could have resolved this.

Secondly, I question the slightly off center placement of the subject's head to the right. Why not use a square crop here with the abovementioned correction?

But that said, I like it. One asset yet unmentioned is the fill light on the face of the subject. Good job overall.
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Lockhart on February 20, 2013 at 8:30 PM
John Neukirch, thanks for your welcome, though I only get to shoot in FL one week each year. As for John Clulow's critique of the snapshot by my wife, regarding head placement, I can only plead that I was trying to get her to follow the Rule of Thirds and didn't quite make it. :wink:
Registered on February 19, 2013, 91 Posts, 500 Comments
Comment posted by Buck Ward on June 4, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Hi Jim

Ding has been a hangout of mine for many years. One of my favorite places for spoonbills and reddish egrets is about 100 yards in the direction you are facing. But mostly it is a place for socializing with fellow photographers (my wife calls them my cronies). Ding is closed till fall for their repaving project, but next time you're there, if you see a gaggle of long lenses with photographers not paying attention, stop by and chat.
Registered on December 8, 2003, 96 Posts, 1917 Comments