A Winter's Day....
by Lon Overacker
... in a deep and dark December.... (name the group/song) ;-)
Well, not trying to portray this as deep and dark, just a play on words and this song came to mind. Plus, this was captured in February (16.) Continuing to go through older images and I hadn't worked this one up from RAW yet.
I'm on my 4th iteration and wanted to post this before I get too far out of whack. I would love your comments, thoughts and especially feedback and critiques.
Yosemite, El Capitan meadow, of course.
Thanks!
Lon
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17 commentsThis is quite exquisite, and your title is perfect. This has great mood and flow, and the larger version has great detail. Really nice work!
While your image certainly has plenty of mood, it is not depressing like that song.
I know the area as well. It seems like all the climbers practice in that area. The composition has all the trees leaning from right to left. I'm not sure I like that. The center of interest is on the large tree on the center left but the right side seems to be imposing itself on it. Could just be me.
It's interesting how your tree image is so similar to your last grass picture.
As a right-handed person I prefer a flow from the left to the right - so maybe flipping the image horizontally might be an option. This is a very personal opinion of course.
Peter
I'm also so glad that a few of you mentioned the left-right thing. Regarding compositions and how we view an image, I believe that those of us who grew up learning to read and write moving left to right, that that does impact how we view an image. An image that is open on the left or flows left to right is more appealing to my eye, in general, but of course the image and subject matter a great deal... ;-) In this particular image, one can look at it either way. I like the open area on the left, allowing the eye to enter the scene from the left. But then, I'm kinda blocked as the main tree is kind of a barrier preventing the eye to keep moving right. Flipping the image as someone suggested, there is a much nicer flow left to right with most all the trees leaning that way. So I think it works very nicely reversed horizontally. Of course it doesn't look correct to me, cause I know it would be backwards... ;-)
Good stuff, thanks for the comments.